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298091 No.26665   [Reply]

One volume sweet schoolgirl story where derp meets dere.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/dcmca4bahztrspw/Oshi_no_Bishojo_ni_kokuhaku_v01.zip/file

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>> No.26705  

GamesGamesGames

>> No.26710  
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Mostly just onions

>> No.26711  

Changes incorporated

>> No.26795  

Disappointingly slow, all things considered.
Helldivers 2 real good though.

>> No.26800  

After a qc pass by Damien



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285812 No.26464   [Reply]

Three stories in one volume. The third one is full length and is for all you drama geeks out there. Sweet adult drama free yuri stories.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/pwizz5z07w1ytsc/Riso_to_Koi.zip/file

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>> No.26534  

Okay, I've made all the updates requested. The mega link has been updated with the latest file. If I don't hear anything, I'll upload to MD and send the Dynasty request on Friday.

>> No.26535  

>>26489
Merin, do you still plan on doing the CLRD and SFX for the second story?

>> No.26742  

Soo...I was let go from my job. On the plus side, I should have some free time to tackle some of my backlog here while job hunting.

>> No.26743  

>>26742

Oof, that sucks. Good luck with the job hunt, and I hope you can squeeze in some fun with more free time. And of course, happy if you can spare some time for the projects here.

>> No.26799  

Picnic chapter is ready for review.

https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1J0N-OVXlrzB3pdPN7yoArFC26J-0ogSR



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255889 No.26778   [Reply]

Cute one shot by the same mangaka who did Handsome Girl and Sheltered Girl.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/gbf680jtdgo7nxd/This_Is_Not_Heaven%252C_But.zip/file

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>> No.26784  

Wootie!

>> No.26785  

this was good :)

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1PyO0574MVeofPWW1OJslzBgHfa4ruLD1

>> No.26794  

General note: Did you intend to use Chinacat for the dialog? I noticed it was used for dialog, thoughts, and narration.

Pg9 pn4: Bubbles are off. "Who?" goes in the second bubble, "C'mon..." third bubble, "What bar..." etc in fourth bubble.
Pg11 pn3: font change mid sentence?
Pg11 pn3: Missing ellipses after "and he kicked me outside..."
Pg11 pn5: "tongue" is misspelled
Pg16 pn3: missing comma between "them" and "it"
Pg17 pn4: font change?
Pg20 pn4: Capitalize "Y"
Pg27 pn3: missing comma after "where"

Make sure you denote "smoking" tag when submitting to Dynasty. Already know dmitry won't want to read this one.

>> No.26796  

I did intend to use Chinacat for dialogue, but if you think that it’s better to use a different font then I’m happy to, I’m just not familiar with how it “should” be done (also, font recommendations would be appreciated :D).

re 27/3: I don’t like how a comma reads there, but I put ellipses and that should be better?

>> No.26798  

I typically use Wild Words for dialogue, Chinacat for narration, Zud Juice for thoughts, and augie for handwriting. That's what's recommended in the how-to guides I've read, since you can get free versions of each.

re 27/3 yes, that reads better



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295849 No.26675   [Reply]

One volume for all you yuri magical girl drama geeks out there.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/ccakdzig1nvstau/Utakata_no_uta.zip/file

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>> No.26780  

Re: Ch4
Pg 67 - that's fine then. That was my interpretation, but your explanation works too.
Pg 73 - In this case, it's the experienced star giving direction to a newer star. Everyone is looking at her as the leader, so Maika is explaining that even if she's anxious, she should be acting as if she's not to boost the confidence of the other cast and crew, as the "leader" of the troupe.
Pg87 - "These" is in reference to Kana's continued words of praise and support same as the "This warmth" that Kana is providing. So "These words" and "This warmth" are tied together.

Ch5 Review:
Pg91 pn1: Either Change to a period or uncapitalize "do"
Pg109 pn2: uncapitalize "The"
Pg110 pn4: Splitting "praised" feels weird. Is it because of the CLRD?
Pg115 pn2: Missing comma between "thing" and "right"
Pg115 pn3: Splitting "Litt-le" feels weird here too

>> No.26782  

I’ve updated p73 and p87, and ch5.
(re p110, it wasn’t about CLRD, I just didn’t like the balance of the other options. But I changed to “She praised // me!” and it’s fine).

>> No.26792  

P125 pn3: "I want to see yo..." is missing from the first text box.

Rest looks good.

>> No.26793  

Chapter 7
Pg150 pn2: Missing "was". "What am I going to do if it "was" an accident?"
Pg151 pn4: Lowercase "L"
Extra
Pg161 pn1: Senpai not san

Interesting story. Didn't end quite how I thought it would.

>> No.26797  

Thanks again for the reviews in this series!

Re 151/4, that is in fact a lowercase L, it just looks uppercase in the font :)

I’ll be uploading to Dynasty and Mangadex every few days… can’t let everyone get spoiled after all ;)



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253955 No.26767   [Reply]

A pretty by-the-numbers foodie manga with a side dish of cute art, subtext and bait. Wait, so bait's being served up in a foodie manga? What's next?

Fair warning, someone's started to scanlate this, but I was already a third of the way done with my TL when their first chapter came out.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/v8aa4b9vujnclpk/Sugar_Meets_Girl_v01.zip/file

>> No.26768  
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Content warning: The author admits yuri baiting was the way he got this one published; the food is the orgasm; The couple's still cute enough where I ship them.

>> No.26791  

Just so anyone doesn’t attempt this (glad I didn’t, ha), it looks like it was picked up by Hot Salt Frying Scans: https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/sugar_meets_girl_ch01



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224849 No.26729   [Reply]

Collected from Hikagen's online something something. The word "cute" is way overused in this handful of vignettes, but it's well earned. Precious, even. 87 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/09qjqjx1hqjj2n1/Suu_to_Ame_sosaku.zip/file

>> No.26730  
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Content warning: Low drama, high libido Ols; these two are dangerous close to that old joke - what does a lesbian bring on a second date? A U-Haul; home is where your honey is.

>> No.26790  

I’ll be batching them, probably in four parts overall



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230601 No.26787   [Reply]

A nice one chapter side story from You’re too handsome, Reki-senpai! by YUAMA. She's the same mangaka that did Kimi to Tsuzuru Utakata.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/qc9zstzmh1ts359/To_Fulfill_Our_Promise.zip/file

>> No.26788  
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Content warning: Hokkaido will neither make the heart grow fonder or grow warmer; What is it with this plague of childhood sweethearts?; don't look now, the issue was resolved with open communication - gruesome, I know.

>> No.26789  

I can pick this up, but to be realistic I might not be able to work on it until June or so. So, if anyone wants to pick it up before that, please let me know!



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240646 No.26731   [Reply]

Take a set of twins, season them with shitty parents, and see what kind of twisty psychological tensions you get. If you like internal struggles, this may be for you. 97 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/eqze0fr2wxq3phh/Our_love_at_the_core_of_it.zip/file

>> No.26732  
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Content warning: Incest; fountain pens as some sort of leaky metaphor; At least one friend isn't dumb as a brick.

>> No.26786  

Surprisingly didn’t take that long, since there’s no SFX. I also discovered that there is an official English translation, but TL and TS are both very bad (see for yourself: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112511074) so I’m glad I did this anyway.

I actually know someone IRL named Rie with shitty parents and a twin sister who was their closest friend for all of childhood. I don’t think they’re quite as close as these two though…

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ouej8kzJpAJn5VVBlhQ0gO-pYsOvFhz9



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4967261 No.25947   [Reply]

Chapters 1-4

RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/e9zd7cqs1kina70

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>> No.26530  

Very interested in seeing this one get done!

>> No.26722  
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1153249

Chapters 5-7 + Extra (Complete)

RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/hri2rgosq9es3ns

>> No.26726  

>>26722

Nice. I'll get on the TL

>> No.26738  
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Orange Otter seems to be MIA since March of last year. Anyone want to pick up the RD/TS?

>> No.26781  

I’ll do the others… eventually

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1zRxIxcWFo79oMAAWkbO_dvhXvlUvh8dB



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1629072 No.26657   [Reply]

If you are a fan of *Crescent Moon and Doughnuts", you likely will enjoy this sweet story. 59 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/mpkkzk35rndn82c/Tamago_no_Tsurezure.zip/file

>> No.26658  
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Content warning: Take a lesbian and a hetero flexible ace woman and throw them in a cocktail shaker and you get a nice liberation libation; yeah, she's codependent, but damn, everyone should be loved that way; the sneak attacks and sly smiles show she's into it.

>> No.26776  

This was really fun!

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1r7SVrwZBgF3WTMNhnAcQepjOu05KBBwR



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