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240646 No.26731  

Take a set of twins, season them with shitty parents, and see what kind of twisty psychological tensions you get. If you like internal struggles, this may be for you. 97 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/eqze0fr2wxq3phh/Our_love_at_the_core_of_it.zip/file

>> No.26732  
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Content warning: Incest; fountain pens as some sort of leaky metaphor; At least one friend isn't dumb as a brick.

>> No.26786  

Surprisingly didn’t take that long, since there’s no SFX. I also discovered that there is an official English translation, but TL and TS are both very bad (see for yourself: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112511074) so I’m glad I did this anyway.

I actually know someone IRL named Rie with shitty parents and a twin sister who was their closest friend for all of childhood. I don’t think they’re quite as close as these two though…

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Ouej8kzJpAJn5VVBlhQ0gO-pYsOvFhz9

>> No.26804  

thru page 50 (51-end are missing)

pg10 pn4: Capitalize "Mum"? Its capitalized everywhere else in the story.
pg12 pn3: "WAS seeing them fighting all the time"
pg13 pn2: I think the tl text works better here, rather than just "still..." Carries more weight.
pg20 pn1: Missing "these" before feelings
pg22 pn1: Missing comma after "hug is that"
pg22 pn3: Either "I haven't" instead of "I've never" or drop "yet"
pg32 pn1: Missing "to" - "mean TO you"
pg38 pn3: Don't need "the college". Just college. I don't think they're meaning there's only one college in the town.
pg46 pn3: uncapitalize "were"



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