One-shot, 24 pages.ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?2hafw8iv1ke8b9e
One-shot, 24 pages.
ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?2hafw8iv1ke8b9e
What with all these ten year old astronomy stories? Content warning: Taking off bras, naked floating, canon lesbian couple on the side.
I'll edit this
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16N-Nbz89MxHQ9mHR2K0i4woGLOq3NSF9?usp=sharing> Taking off bras, naked floatingwhere??
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16N-Nbz89MxHQ9mHR2K0i4woGLOq3NSF9?usp=sharing
> Taking off bras, naked floating
where??
>>26060Ah, different story I translated about the same time. Got them confused. Soz.
>>26060
Ah, different story I translated about the same time. Got them confused. Soz.
>>26075Trying to lure in editors with false promises of naked floating!? Unconscionable.>>26060I think this looks good. One suggestion, I think on page 03 in the top left panel, that double box might look better if you treat it as a single box and just typeset everything in one block, to avoid all the hyphenation.
>>26075
Trying to lure in editors with false promises of naked floating!? Unconscionable.
I think this looks good. One suggestion, I think on page 03 in the top left panel, that double box might look better if you treat it as a single box and just typeset everything in one block, to avoid all the hyphenation.
>>26077I'm surprised you haven't noticed yet that I'm just recycling the same ten translations over and over again...
>>26077
I'm surprised you haven't noticed yet that I'm just recycling the same ten translations over and over again...
Updated page 03Bamboozled I was
Updated page 03
Bamboozled I was
Released.
And updated the link with the missing page 8. Oops.
Also, someone in the Dynasty scanlation discord posted some suggestions/fixes:Page 5, top right panelchange>are our astronomy club members.to>are astronomy club members.Page 7, bottom left panelchange>What's up all of the sudden, Rika?to>What's up all of a sudden, Rika?page 10, bottom left panelchange>because I was reading the all planetariums scripts.to>because I was reading all the planetarium scripts.Page 13, bottom panelchange>The only thing to do was to work as hard as I can.to>The only thing to do is to work as hard as I can.Also, my name is spelled wrong in the credits, but honestly, given the usual quality of my QC work, I think that's pretty fitting haha.
Also, someone in the Dynasty scanlation discord posted some suggestions/fixes:
Page 5, top right panel
change
>are our astronomy club members.
to
>are astronomy club members.
Page 7, bottom left panel
>What's up all of the sudden, Rika?
>What's up all of a sudden, Rika?
page 10, bottom left panel
>because I was reading the all planetariums scripts.
>because I was reading all the planetarium scripts.
Page 13, bottom panel
>The only thing to do was to work as hard as I can.
>The only thing to do is to work as hard as I can.
Also, my name is spelled wrong in the credits, but honestly, given the usual quality of my QC work, I think that's pretty fitting haha.
>>26109Fixed, and I'm sorry about misspelling your name!
>>26109
Fixed, and I'm sorry about misspelling your name!
>>26120Thanks, I've updated the link with the fixes.
>>26120
Thanks, I've updated the link with the fixes.
This translation is listed in the wrong series at Manga-Updates. It's some lolicon hentai oneshot.https://www.mangaupdates.com/series/bd9ck1r/planetarium
This translation is listed in the wrong series at Manga-Updates. It's some lolicon hentai oneshot.
https://www.mangaupdates.com/series/bd9ck1r/planetarium
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