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3716609 No.5773  

One-shot, 24 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?2hafw8iv1ke8b9e

>> No.25800  
File: Planetarium .txt -(7940 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

What with all these ten year old astronomy stories? Content warning: Taking off bras, naked floating, canon lesbian couple on the side.

>> No.25926  

I'll edit this

>> No.26060  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16N-Nbz89MxHQ9mHR2K0i4woGLOq3NSF9?usp=sharing

> Taking off bras, naked floating

where??

>> No.26075  

>>26060

Ah, different story I translated about the same time. Got them confused. Soz.

>> No.26077  

>>26075

Trying to lure in editors with false promises of naked floating!? Unconscionable.

>>26060

I think this looks good. One suggestion, I think on page 03 in the top left panel, that double box might look better if you treat it as a single box and just typeset everything in one block, to avoid all the hyphenation.

>> No.26078  

>>26077

I'm surprised you haven't noticed yet that I'm just recycling the same ten translations over and over again...

>> No.26087  

Updated page 03

Bamboozled I was

>> No.26106  

Released.

>> No.26108  

And updated the link with the missing page 8. Oops.

>> No.26109  

Also, someone in the Dynasty scanlation discord posted some suggestions/fixes:

Page 5, top right panel

change

>are our astronomy club members.

to

>are astronomy club members.

Page 7, bottom left panel

change

>What's up all of the sudden, Rika?

to

>What's up all of a sudden, Rika?

page 10, bottom left panel

change

>because I was reading the all planetariums scripts.

to

>because I was reading all the planetarium scripts.

Page 13, bottom panel

change

>The only thing to do was to work as hard as I can.

to

>The only thing to do is to work as hard as I can.

Also, my name is spelled wrong in the credits, but honestly, given the usual quality of my QC work, I think that's pretty fitting haha.

>> No.26120  

>>26109

Fixed, and I'm sorry about misspelling your name!

>> No.26134  

>>26120

Thanks, I've updated the link with the fixes.

>> No.26147  

This translation is listed in the wrong series at Manga-Updates. It's some lolicon hentai oneshot.

https://www.mangaupdates.com/series/bd9ck1r/planetarium



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