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>> No.16945  
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>> No.23588  

103ch's clean here:
https://cloud.mail.ru/public/Au7p/ozweZFMcd
I cleaned some of the SFX, hoping they will be typed (I usually kick our Russian typer to do that)))

>> No.24399  

Okay, typesetted.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_bW8qIslTNP4WmwKKE065lR5GmZvsPr_

>> No.24435  

>>24399
36
panels 2-4
->Change ellipses from vertical to horizontal ...

38
panel 1
->Ellipsis to horizontal

No time to be looking behind us.
No time to worry about others.

Don't look now, but I think we're getting outfought here.
They might actually be putting up more of a fight than us.
[meaning Momoka and Isuzu]

39
ellipsis

40
---skiiiiid
->you can erase the line in front of this sfx

41
twitch-----
->remove line

ellipsis

42
"what"
->emphasis instead of quotes

43
It /can/ exist,
That certain something...

that certain something.
/can/ exist.

Ping-Pong Table Flipper
Tea Table Flipper
(Not sure where I got ping pong from....)

45
ellipsis

46
atfter
after

50
She's really giving me all I can take
She's really giving me all I can take here.

tover
over

fat
Fat
sugar
Sugar
->Might want to use a different font here, these are the actual elements leaving her body

51
trade this pretentious nonsense
trade pretentious nonsense

Next Stop Tenchi Academy
->Change the dots to lines maybe.
-Next Stop Tenchi Academy-

52
panels 1 and 2 - ellipses

We lost our notes page? Not really essential for this chapter though.

>> No.24437  

Got it.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_bW8qIslTNP4WmwKKE065lR5GmZvsPr_

Is there anything that needs to be put in the notes?

>> No.24438  

>>24437
The notes in the "n" section at the end of the TL would go on a page at the end of the release (since there are a ton of contemporary references in HXB no one outside of Japan would ever get). You can skip it for this chapter since they're pretty trivial

>> No.24443  

Are you guys planning to continue this upto HxB 2?

>> No.24444  

>>24443
Yeah, I'll translate HXB 2

>> No.24702  

guess this can be release?

>> No.24703  

>>24437

Released. Sorry about the delay, I must've missed that this was ready. If you ever think I've missed anything, please go ahead and let me know.

>> No.24704  

>>24703

Better late than never <3
Thank you very much for your efforts <3!!!

>> No.24707  

When's the next one?

>> No.24716  

>>16944
There's some grey lines in the clouds with dots only. Is that okay? (I know, it isn't).

>> No.24717  

Which page?



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