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File: はやて103_01.jpg -(306696 B, 813x1200) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
306696 No.16944  
>> No.16945  
File: HXB-103.txt -(17690 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
>> No.23588  

103ch's clean here:
https://cloud.mail.ru/public/Au7p/ozweZFMcd
I cleaned some of the SFX, hoping they will be typed (I usually kick our Russian typer to do that)))

>> No.24399  

Okay, typesetted.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_bW8qIslTNP4WmwKKE065lR5GmZvsPr_

>> No.24435  

>>24399
36
panels 2-4
->Change ellipses from vertical to horizontal ...

38
panel 1
->Ellipsis to horizontal

No time to be looking behind us.
No time to worry about others.

Don't look now, but I think we're getting outfought here.
They might actually be putting up more of a fight than us.
[meaning Momoka and Isuzu]

39
ellipsis

40
---skiiiiid
->you can erase the line in front of this sfx

41
twitch-----
->remove line

ellipsis

42
"what"
->emphasis instead of quotes

43
It /can/ exist,
That certain something...

that certain something.
/can/ exist.

Ping-Pong Table Flipper
Tea Table Flipper
(Not sure where I got ping pong from....)

45
ellipsis

46
atfter
after

50
She's really giving me all I can take
She's really giving me all I can take here.

tover
over

fat
Fat
sugar
Sugar
->Might want to use a different font here, these are the actual elements leaving her body

51
trade this pretentious nonsense
trade pretentious nonsense

Next Stop Tenchi Academy
->Change the dots to lines maybe.
-Next Stop Tenchi Academy-

52
panels 1 and 2 - ellipses

We lost our notes page? Not really essential for this chapter though.

>> No.24437  

Got it.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_bW8qIslTNP4WmwKKE065lR5GmZvsPr_

Is there anything that needs to be put in the notes?

>> No.24438  

>>24437
The notes in the "n" section at the end of the TL would go on a page at the end of the release (since there are a ton of contemporary references in HXB no one outside of Japan would ever get). You can skip it for this chapter since they're pretty trivial

>> No.24443  

Are you guys planning to continue this upto HxB 2?

>> No.24444  

>>24443
Yeah, I'll translate HXB 2

>> No.24702  

guess this can be release?

>> No.24703  

>>24437

Released. Sorry about the delay, I must've missed that this was ready. If you ever think I've missed anything, please go ahead and let me know.

>> No.24704  

>>24703

Better late than never <3
Thank you very much for your efforts <3!!!

>> No.24707  

When's the next one?

>> No.24716  

>>16944
There's some grey lines in the clouds with dots only. Is that okay? (I know, it isn't).

>> No.24717  

Which page?

>> No.24750  

Well, that's what I found with fast looking: 36, 38, 39, 40, 41, 44, 45.

>> No.24751  

not sure what grey lines you mean here. I don't see any lines...except some jpeg artifacts...

>> No.24752  
File: 036.png -(1912768 B, 1398x2000) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
1912768

>>24750
>>24751
So from what I can tell, it's not actually gray lines, but erased parts of the background. If you zoom in on the google drive and pull down, you can see the folder moving behind the image.

So on MangaDex, for example, if you read the chapter in light mode, it's unnoticeable. If you read it in dark mode, you can see the dark grey lines in the bubbles, because it's actually showing the background behind the image.

>> No.24759  

Ooh, that! Got it. Need to remind myself, better use clone than eraser.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1_bW8qIslTNP4WmwKKE065lR5GmZvsPr_?usp=sharing

>> No.24765  

>>24759

Updated link.



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