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457266 No.17554  

Public raw, one-shot. The number of pages is higher than I can count, but it's basically infinite.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/wgswabiz20ti1bv/%5BTaamo%5D_Moondrops.rar
There's no tank release that I'm aware of, so you can go ahead and use this to edit.

Taamo is the author of the shoujo manga Taiyou no Ie.

>> No.17555  
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Twang warning in effect.

>> No.20025  

I'm editing this. Hopefully I don't regret it because of its length.

>> No.20026  

Oh and Gulf, if you don't mind, please translate 090 and 010 - 011. I'll typeset both. I already stitched the latter.

>> No.20028  

>>20026
I'll do it.

The phrase 初登場 (debut) is used, which I guess here means first appearance in Yuri Hime.

9

生まれる前の記憶がある
I have a memory from a past life,
どこか甘くて
It feels sort of sweet,
ふわふわしてて
And fluffy,
抱きしめられてる気持ちになる
Like a soft embrace.

初登場
First Appearance. (in Yuri Hime)
愛しい温度に少女はたゆたう…実力派少女漫画家,登場
With lovely grace the girls are set to play... By an esteemed shoujo mangaka.
(or something like: The girls are written with lovely grace...)

10

ほわほわ読み切り46P
A snuggly story of 46 pages.
うちには恋とか男の子とかよーわからん。
I just don't get things like love and boys.
でも,あの子はなんか気になる。
But... I'm kinda interested in /her/.
…これってなんやろ?
...What could this mean?

11

こまやかに女の子の想いを描く大人気作家が初登場★
A heartfelt love story between girls, from a popular mangaka making her first appearance in Yuri Hime ★
タアモ
Taamo
(★Ta★a★mo)
もっと仲良くしたいって思うねん
I'd like to get closer to her.
このこ,めっちゃなついてくるんやけど…
This girl, she's really comin' on to me...

>> No.20029  
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1764082

>>20028
Thanks a lot.

>> No.20126  
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3792834

Phew, finally finished.

QCv1: http://www.mediafire.com/file/76ucc2tdv92ppbo/Moondrops_QCv1.zip

>> No.20130  

>>20126
Page 9
I have a memory from a past life, =>
I have a memory from before I was born,

Page 22
Do you do infrared texting? ->
Can we exchange numbers with infrared?
(I think it's that.)

Page 49
Oh yeah... that hair tier of hers came apart, didn't it? ->
Oh yeah... that hair tie of hers came apart, didn't it?

>> No.20182  

I wanna release this as quickly as possible, so I'm bumping. Hopefully someone's willing do more QC soon. Thanks guys.

>> No.20186  
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>>20126

I was wondering what infrared texting was on page 22. Procyon suggested a different wording, but I still don't know what infrared has to do with texting. Oh well.

>> No.20190  

>>20182
I'm away until about 27-28 December though, so I can't release it immediately.
>>20186
I think it's used only to exchange numbers without having to tell each other your number. Maybe like Bluetooth.

>> No.20191  

>>20190
It's all right, I was hoping before this year ends as I don't wanna bring responsibilities in for the next year since I'm picking up some h-manga to work with.
>>20186
Thanks, will update in a bit.

>> No.20199  

QCv2: http://www.mediafire.com/file/3zy93q8af4v5r7u/Moondrops_QCv2.zip

Reshaped some dialogs and added a typeset for the title on page 09. I also removed the ad stuff on one of the pages, as well as the page numbers.

>> No.20207  

>>20199

pg23 - p1,b1

add comma after "come"

Otherwise, it's fine with me.

>> No.20208  
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392160

>>20207

>> No.20218  

>>20199
It still needs a new credits page.

>> No.20223  

>>20218
Sorry, I'm confused? I already added a new credits page on the second QC.

>> No.20226  

>>20223
I see it now, unzip was bugging out, but 7z works.

Released.



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