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Scans from http://yuri-daisuki-sharess.blogspot.com/2014/05/yuri-hime-vol42-201405.html . Originally published in YuriHime 42 (May 2014). 8 pages.

>> No.18309  
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One thing I like about yuri is that self-discovery and self-acceptance are common themes.

>> No.18356  

As is NTR... It could've only been worse if she asked for holding hands.

>> No.23930  

I'll edit this.

>> No.23989  

editing not yet done? lemme edit it myself and see.

>> No.23993  


Rai, it's only been a week since anon said they'd edit this. Give them time to work on it. It's only okay to take over a project when the editor hands it over or when they haven't been active in six months.

>> No.23994  

>>23993 Okay then.

>> No.24006  


Yeah, Rai, I’m still editing this. Sorry for taking so long (even though this has been available for 4ish years already). Hopefully, it won’t take me too much longer to finish.

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>> No.24038  
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Text shape, alterations of the text, and a couple suggestions on punctuation.

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What does this say?

>> No.24044  


Bitter memories...

>> No.24045  


Bitter memories? Should... should I include that?

>> No.24052  


If you want. I get the feeling that this could be classified as "magazine chatter," sort of an attention-grabbing headline that wouldn't be included in a tank release. As magazine chatter, I think it's fine to remove it, if you want to be truer to what it would look like in the tank; if you want the magazine experience, then keep it in.

I might tend slightly towards removing it, but I could go either way.

>> No.24054  



I removed it. I think it would be confusing.

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just realized there was a typo on page 2

Why this happen? -> Why did this happen?

>> No.24230  


I've updated the download link on the homepage.

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