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Raw by jhshrb.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/99wd55ccbg9lxhe/%5BAkuta_Fumie%5D_Graduation_Day.rar

From Hirari 12 and I Got Myself a Little Sister.

>> No.20127  

If anyone's willing to translate this, I'd be happy to edit. It's pretty short anyways.

>> No.20174  
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It is quite short

>> No.20180  

>>20174
I took the liberty in editing some of the dialogue as they seem a bit stiff. Some SFX as well. If the changes I did made the translation completely wrong, let me know.

Some still seem a bit stiff, so if anyone's down to rephrase some of the dialogs, that would be great.

Thanks.

QCv1: http://www.mediafire.com/file/jpxemb7b3bd73kh/Graduation_Day_QCv1.zip

>> No.20185  
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>>20180

>> No.20187  

>>20180

Also, could you erase all of the page numbers from the pages?

>> No.20189  

>>20180

You're right, my translation did turn out a little awkward after all, sorry. This looks mostly fine now, but I would change this:

Page 42

>"go straight there" -> "go straight home" or "go straight back"

Originally it's something like "No stopping on the way", but I don't think that's how someone would convey that in English. Pick whichever looks best.

>> No.20198  

QCv2: http://www.mediafire.com/file/qa97u6jnul1xrf0/Graduation_Day_QCv2.zip

I didn't remove the spaces in between hyphens (it's a personal preference)

>> No.20200  

>>20198

credits page

musicguy96 -> musicgod96

I'm not sure if you wanted to make "qc." small like the previous ones or the same size as the names.

Otherwise, it looks fine to me.

>> No.20203  
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505338

>>20200
Accidentally combine yours and Schuyguy's names. Here!

>> No.20204  

>>20203
combined*

>> No.20229  

>>20198
>>20203
Released.



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