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258805 No.21577  

Hello, I mentioned in the General thread that I would like to try to continue Holy Girl Paradigm where it left off 2.5(!) years ago.

In that thread, Procyon provided the following:

>Did this continue past Hirari? I have raws for chapter 6 & 7 from Hirari 13 & 14. Not sure if threads were made for those.
>https://mega.nz/#!DJBRASpI!eSmgQ1OI8zs7P4UtkPskywSv7o3CBLxeVFpwSF809io
>https://mega.nz/#!6Jon1ChB!wUjuzbJSzi8yngpWdHJ4uUjiaDkO9GMl8Pj2a6wvB1A
>https://mega.nz/#!zdJ1BISY!sSaqoqiWZos3Me-FWycPrwOArCxE-O49lilrPKtVHvE

This appears to be chapter 6 and 7, but according to the page I posted there also appears to be an afterword that isn't linked here.

I've already started cleaning in the hopes that someone else can translate, so if someone would like to translate, I could do the text too.

Thanks.

>> No.21758  

Well, no one ever tried translating, so I'm going to post some PSDs here. They're mostly done.

https://files.catbox.moe/tt639s.zip
https://files.catbox.moe/dw8xpm.zip

>> No.22093  
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Here's the translation for chapter 6. Sorry, I put this off for a bit. I was busy doing important things like reading and gardening.

>> No.22112  

>>22093
Everything is just fine! I have some important things too, but I will get to this eventually.
In the mean time, does anyone know what fonts were used previously?

>> No.22125  

>>22112
The title font is KG Ray of Sunshine
https://www.dafont.com/pt/kg-ray-of-sunshine.font?text=Holy+Girl+Paradigm

I'm browsing dafont for the particular font used in the text. Haven't found it yet, although I did find some quite similar alternatives

>> No.22126  

I KNEW THIS FONT WAS FAMILIAR!!!

After a while searching I found the text font. I remember using it way back when I did graphic work for a school.

It's Chinacat!
https://www.dafont.com/pt/chinacat.font

>> No.22134  

I asked elsewhere too and they said:
Top one is Chinacat thin.
Bottom is KG Ray of Sunshine.
The middle one is Anjelika Rose.

>> No.22136  

More specifically:
Chinacat Thin - Narration
KG Ray of Sunshine - Title
Anjelika Rose - Dialogue

>> No.22138  

Okay, here is chapter 6. Please give me some QC. I can supply the .PSD files too if you want.
https://files.catbox.moe/k2gmfs.zip

I was going to replace the title on the first page, but trying to fix those flowers with smokey text outline all over it was killing me. Hopefully it is fine as it is here.

>> No.22140  

>>22138
Sorry I've been putting this off a bit. I transcribed chapter 7 and just thought, phew, that's a lot of text for 24 pages. I'm working on it now, though, so I'll try to have it done in a couple of days.

Here are some corrections. Unfortunately, I can't help much with editing if you have concerns there.
164
It startled me how short it was before things went back to normal. -> It startled my how uneventfully things went back to normal.

165
It feels much better not that we're back to being friends. -> It feels much better now that we're back to being friends.

Missing "I don't have any regrets, but..." in the bottom left.

166
Like Midori said, that's how love in when you're a teen... not to mention both girls. -> Like Midori said, that's how love is when you're a teen... not to mention both girls.

169
In the bottom left she's mentally shouting, and the text is bigger than the rest in Japanese, but it's quite small here.

170
Missing "I'll quit the literature club."

172
Well, it's not like its decided yet but... -> Well, it's not like it's decided yet, but...

I did fall in love with you after all, so it may be possible? -> I did fall in love with you after all, so it's possible.

176
Letter... -> Letter?

>> No.22141  

>>22140
Thanks. I'm not claiming to be the best editor in the world, but what I'm doing is far better than letting it sit for another three years.

Here's everything fixed up:
https://files.catbox.moe/1fsnbb.zip

>> No.22144  

>>22141
That's the spirit!

One more thing:
172
Please don't use a question mark for "I did fall in love with you after all, so it's possible?"

>> No.22149  

>>22144
Ah, sorry, I missed that!
Here's the update:
https://files.catbox.moe/s096t8.zip

>> No.22150  

>>22149
Looks good. In the credits, the raws are from Phyis. (you can reupload just the credits page here if you want)

>> No.22151  
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>>22150

>> No.22152  
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>>22149
Thanks!

Here's chapter 7. It's interesting how it plays with yuri tropes. The page where Aoi and Reika talk about the school rules and how tradition is nice and everything, but some rules need to be changed really sums things up. I imagine it was more relevant when it was published 10 years ago, but stuff like, "Girls love is just a phase," or, "I love you, but in a completely platonic way that just happens to be indistinguishable from actual romance," still comes up.

>> No.22153  

>>22149
Released.

>> No.22154  

>>22152
Yeah, it's clear right from the first chapter it's about yuri tropes, starting off hard with the "beautiful, refined ojou-sama" and "everyone in the girls' school is gay" tropes. I'll start on this soon.

>> No.22155  

Side-note: I guess that sage is disabled, but noko still works here?

>> No.22158  

>>22155
Both sage and noko work.

(the thread was already on top when you saged)

>> No.22165  

>>22158
Makes sense. Let's see if nokosage works. I'm also starting to work on chapter 7 typesetting now.

>> No.22175  
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The wording on the panel on the right here (page 347) seems strange. Is she trying to say that Aoi is special to her, or am I misunderstanding?

>> No.22176  

>>22175
Pretty much. That part threw me at first, but I think it's referring to the bit about friends before. When they were talking in the bathroom, Riri said she didn't mind things the way they were, then Yuki asked if that was because "friendship never ends." Riri then responded talking about how she doesn't believe that, and has lost contact with old friends, especially the ones with boyfriends. For the line in question, I think she's implying that she's not worried about anything happening to their relationship because she thinks Aoi is special and different from other friends. That's my interpretation, at any rate.

>> No.22177  

>>22176
Oh, that she doesn't believe Aoi is the type of friend that she will never hear from again. I got you.

Anyway, I just finished the text. Take a look!
https://files.catbox.moe/n5d57d.zip

>> No.22181  

>>22177
Cool. Unless tank scans show up with the extra and afterword, we're just about done. Let me know if you see another series you want to finish.

340
The two bubbles in the middle left panel should be switched.

You never know what'll happen in real life. -> You never know what'll happen in life.

341
Sorry, there's still something I have to discuss with Reiko-sama-- -> Sorry, there's still something I have to discuss with Reika-sama--

342
There. -> Here.

343
And then I was saying it out load, right? -> And then I was saying it out loud, right?

344
That's why I don't mind if things stay they way they are. - > That's why I don't mind if things stay the way they are.

Maybe just do quotes instead of the 「」 thing.

Missing the ♪ in the last bubble.

345
If it's longer than the white line around the collar, it must be tied. -> If it covers the white line around the collar, it must be tied.

348
Missing "Slam" in the bottom right.

You're being loud, Yuki. -> Yuki, you're being loud.

355
This feeling since me came about so naturally that I hadn't noticed it until now. -> This feeling inside me came about so naturally that I hadn't noticed it until now.

357
Spring -> spring

Could you put "Ahem" on Riri's side? It looks like Aoi is interrupting her, but it's more like Riri going "look at me."

>> No.22182  

>>22181
Update: https://files.catbox.moe/tb6evm.zip

If the afterword and extras are found, I can do them. I don't actively lurk YP boards, but if you post in the General thread on /u/ I'll probably see it.
I'll also post the .PSD file .zip archives once everything is out in the event something needs to be changed later.

Are there any other YP series which have been stuck in scanlation for far too long, or anything else by Morishima? Doing this editing is really boring and all, but I might work on something.

>> No.22183  

>>22182
Thanks. Just one more things
344
"Love will one day end, but friendship lasts a lifetime?" -> "Love will one day end, but friendship lasts a lifetime"?

I've only recently been translating some things on YP, and I don't typically read translated manga, so hell if I know what long abandoned projects are floating around. I've seen the 2DK, GPen, Alarm Clock thread, but it's a big project, and I don't want to translate that Kyuushuu dialect.

I hear you about editing. It's not something I'm tempted to do, and I appreciate the people who take the time to do it.

>> No.22184  

>>22183
Update: https://files.catbox.moe/hpn6w6.zip

>> No.22189  

>>22184
Released.

>> No.22191  

HGP6 PSD: https://files.catbox.moe/9jju1s.zip
HGP7 PSD: https://files.catbox.moe/y711nc.zip

>> No.22193  

While reading chapter 7 I found a small typo on page 348:
"Me devotion to her..." ← My devotion

>> No.22196  
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528583

>>22193
Good catch. Here's the updated page.

>> No.22198  

>>22196
Updated.



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