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RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/0y44py798hx8xej

>> No.21802  

Is anyone interested in translating this? I'd like to do the editing.

>> No.21844  

I think Gulf Standard did the Cotton Candy series, but if they don't want to do this one, then I will.

>> No.21847  

I'll do it

>> No.22250  

Bumping please.

>> No.23069  

Bumping please

>> No.23304  


>> No.24042  

So, it's been a year and a half since you posted saying you'd translate this, Gulf Standard. Are you going to do it, or shall I?

>> No.24053  

Didn't he once say he quit translating?

>> No.24055  


Oh, I'm sorry. I must've missed that.

I guess I'll translate this then.

>> No.24056  

I'll edit this if Nyandere's not around anymore, though if they are, just let me know.

>> No.24078  
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Here's the translation.

>> No.24080  

Here are the cleaned pages:

Anyone know how to contact Nyandere? If not, anyone have any suggestion on how long I should wait? It's kind of awkward since it's been two years since this post and I don't think I've seen them post recently, but they were waiting on the translation, so it's not like they flaked on it.

>> No.24081  

It's been almost 2 years since they posted and they haven't popped up in this thread since then. You're safe to go ahead and edit.

>> No.24082  

I’ll do this. Is that okay?

>> No.24083  

Yeah, that's fine.

>> No.24103  


>> No.24106  


Looking through this, I realized I missed some writing. On page 143, in that middle panel just to the left of the right-side bubble, it says ベッドカバー. That's "Your bedcover".

>> No.24107  


Some of this might be a matter of preference, but:

I think the text all around can be made a bit bigger. The font size in the original takes up about half the bubble size, but it's more like 1/4 for the English.

It'd look a bit nicer to change the emdashes to 200% width hypens.

"Her Birthday is January 27th"
Add a full stop maybe? It's missing in the script, but the next narration line has a capital, so I think it was left out unintentionally.

I'd recommend either erasing the original SFX for "Thunk", or moving the English SFX beside the original.

In the same panel, "Ow" is unreplaced.

>> No.24117  


>> No.24126  


Hey, sorry, there's one thing in the script I'd like to change. On page 143, can you change "That one was grandma's." to "That's one of grandma's." I'm afraid the current wording makes it sound like she's dead, even though it say she's alive.

Other than that, I think this is good to go.

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>> No.24133  

It's missing a credits page.

>> No.24162  


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