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RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/0y44py798hx8xej

>> No.21802  

Is anyone interested in translating this? I'd like to do the editing.

>> No.21844  

I think Gulf Standard did the Cotton Candy series, but if they don't want to do this one, then I will.

>> No.21847  

I'll do it

>> No.22250  

Bumping please.

>> No.23069  

Bumping please

>> No.23304  


>> No.24042  

So, it's been a year and a half since you posted saying you'd translate this, Gulf Standard. Are you going to do it, or shall I?

>> No.24053  

Didn't he once say he quit translating?

>> No.24055  


Oh, I'm sorry. I must've missed that.

I guess I'll translate this then.

>> No.24056  

I'll edit this if Nyandere's not around anymore, though if they are, just let me know.

>> No.24078  
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Here's the translation.

>> No.24080  

Here are the cleaned pages:

Anyone know how to contact Nyandere? If not, anyone have any suggestion on how long I should wait? It's kind of awkward since it's been two years since this post and I don't think I've seen them post recently, but they were waiting on the translation, so it's not like they flaked on it.

>> No.24081  

It's been almost 2 years since they posted and they haven't popped up in this thread since then. You're safe to go ahead and edit.

>> No.24082  

I’ll do this. Is that okay?

>> No.24083  

Yeah, that's fine.

>> No.24103  


>> No.24106  


Looking through this, I realized I missed some writing. On page 143, in that middle panel just to the left of the right-side bubble, it says ベッドカバー. That's "Your bedcover".

>> No.24107  


Some of this might be a matter of preference, but:

I think the text all around can be made a bit bigger. The font size in the original takes up about half the bubble size, but it's more like 1/4 for the English.

It'd look a bit nicer to change the emdashes to 200% width hypens.

"Her Birthday is January 27th"
Add a full stop maybe? It's missing in the script, but the next narration line has a capital, so I think it was left out unintentionally.

I'd recommend either erasing the original SFX for "Thunk", or moving the English SFX beside the original.

In the same panel, "Ow" is unreplaced.

>> No.24117  


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