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File: hontono-kokoro-9-2-768x1068.jpg -(256508 B, 768x1068) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
256508 No.22451  

Raws: http://yurinavi.com/2018/07/24/hontono-kokoro-9/

Raws packed: http://www.mediafire.com/file/tr6ckakqg5fjo8b/Honto_no_Kokoro_ch09.rar/file

4 pages

>> No.22452  
File: Honto no kokoro 9.txt -(2476 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Translation.

I'm well aware some of the sentences are somewhat stiff. Please rephrase wherever you find appropriate. Thanks

>> No.22457  

I'm on it. <3

>> No.22458  

Done. Requesting QC please.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/3c323231fca2mq4/Honto_no_Kokoro_Ch09.zip/file

>> No.22460  

>>22458

Just a few touch-ups:

01.png

that person is not your true friend. -> then they're not being a true friend to you.

it is more important to find someone -> it's best to find the ones

If they could read... -> If you can read...

>> No.22462  

>>22460

Fixed. Same link:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/3c323231fca2mq4/Honto_no_Kokoro_Ch09.zip/file

>> No.22464  

>>22460

Thanks, that is awesome.

>> No.22471  

>>22462

I think we're good here.

>> No.22472  

>>22462
Released.



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