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556969 No.22934  

One-shot, 16 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/y8no43k9

>> No.24304  
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TL

>> No.24305  

I'll work on this if no one has started it yet. :)

>> No.24318  

cleaning and typeset done :)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Fue3yCG0jOLF7TDDyiRq64tuN3ko9E_t/view?usp=sharing

>> No.24321  
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>>24318

Mostly typesetting.

>> No.24324  

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16_YzXeX6IhmjMJCuBxp_tiXFwITgUbma/view?usp=sharing

--for "what?!" on page 102, I tried using a different pattern, closer to the original, do let me know if I should change.

>> No.24330  
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>>24324

I think the fill effect on 102 is better now. It's still not quite like the original; you can see it uses a uniform screen tone, whereas this effect still doesn't fill the letters in entirely. I think it gets the point across, though, without introducing any splotches that unduly caught the eye as in the previous version.

Here are a few other miscellaneous cleanup remarks.

>> No.24333  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1D7yJ5EJUNCJWYuBiYzvzm8uOBKokhIH5

tried changing the pattern again. looked up online for some screentones. hope this one is better (´ ∀ ` *)

>> No.24336  

>>24333

Yes, this is the best "What!?" fill out of all of them so far.

A few minor things:

103

we became friends a anyway -> we became friends anyway (Remove errant 'a')

105

You said, -> You said (Remove comma)

113

Be in love with me, please. (You can add a stroke here for authenticity, if you want, but I think it's plenty legible as is)

>> No.24339  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1k25wCeauySKR43ueg4rGvQ48aFfCTnq-

updated it :)

>> No.24341  

>>24339

I think this is good to release.

>> No.24344  

Released.

>> No.24372  

This release is listed on Manga-updates under ID #128647, but it is a shoujo series by a different author.

>> No.24373  

>>24372

You can go to manga-updates and fix it, or make an edit request.



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