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243080 No.23571  

One-shot, 18 pages.

>> No.24295  
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From the author of Hare+Guu, of all things

>> No.24310  

I can do the editing.

>> No.24325  

The boxes in image 264 look bad no matter what I do lol. I tried pattern overlay too but the patterns don't line up and the transitions are pretty much nonexistent. Is there something else I can try out?

>> No.24331  
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Typesetting comments.

The pattern on 264 is pretty nasty, I agree. I don't think any of it looks bad enough to hold up release; I think the leftmost box is definitely the worst of the three, lacking a lot of text on top of it to cover the traces of the original.

I think your best bet might be to try to sample from a section where the screen tone is consistent and use it as a fill pattern over a selected region. The effect with the different circles overlapping each other for different kinds of fills makes matching fill patterns to filled areas difficult, but you might be able to come up with something more convincing than what you have here through a bit of trial and error. Either way, I agree that it's tough, and I'd be willing to release like this.

>> No.24332  

I tried to fill the circle with a fitting pattern as you said. I think it looks better than the first one but there is still a lot of improvement left. :')

>> No.24335  


I noticed only one thing this time:


And it's not like/I can give/Mayuko her/"happy ending." -> And it's not/like I can give/Mayuko her/"happy ending." (Or fiddle with the lining a little; try to make the lines of as equal length as possible, echoing the straight edges of the containing box)

Besides that, I think it's good to go.

>> No.24338  

New link is up.

>> No.24342  


Looking good. Let's release this.

>> No.24343  


One thing. On page 269, bottom panel, center box, "another" should be a single word.

>> No.24346  

Oh yes whoops. I have corrected it.

>> No.24348  


>> No.24371  

It should probably be mentioned that Lililicious released this and the other chapters in the series quite a while ago, in case you plan to do the rest.

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