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One-shot, 32 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/y62rjrlf

>> No.24284  
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Translation

>> No.24366  

Can i do this?

>> No.24367  

Go for it!

>> No.24384  

https://www.mediafire.com/file/jdediybfvmc26e7/There_is_a_song_i_want_you_to_hear.zip/file

>> No.24385  

>>24384
image 169. Maybe you'd want to make that 'Mmm...' a tad bigger?
image 170. You forgot to clean a hiragana and there's some spots you didn't clean in the bubble.
image 174. In the 'Haa' you might wanna redraw some lines in her head.
But honestly these are very nitpicky, I just couldn't find any mistake tbh. But hey, I wasn't prepared for such ending!

>> No.24394  

https://www.mediafire.com/file/h3n5x52vbtsq70j/There_is_a_song_i_want_you_to_hear.zip/file



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