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191590 No.24069  

Raws posted by an anon on /u/

>> No.24070  

Your link points to something else.

>> No.24071  


>> No.24076  

Oh, this looks good. I want to translate this.

>> No.24077  

I can edit this!

>> No.24084  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 1 translation.txt -(28111 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Okay, here's the first chapter translated. Trying to translate 面倒 in all its various forms so that it fits in each specific context while still maintaining continuity was, well, a pain.

>> No.24088  

The editing was also a pain

The raws are pretty strange. Every single page is a different size, ranging from 976x1394, to 1344x1920. Should I scale them all down to 976x1394 for the sake of consistency, or leave them as is? Maybe I should've standardized them before editing, but I didn't.


The chapter itself was really sweet. I like when stories take a sex positive approach. The humour was great too.

>> No.24091  


On page 30, that should be "it's not just a whim". You're missing the "not".

Other than that, I think it looks good.

>> No.24092  


Oh, I guess I was actually the one to leave that out of my translation. Sorry, my bad!

>> No.24093  

The raws are actually from a public site.

>> No.24094  

Fixed p30 and standardized the pages to 976px width. There's some minor variation in the height (~5px) but I figure that's fine.

>> No.24095  


Okay. This just needs the credits page and it's ready to go.

>> No.24096  

Added credits page!

>> No.24102  


>> No.24349  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 2 bedroom telepahty translation.txt -(33818 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's a translation for the next story.

>> No.24412  

I can do the editing of the next story if no one will :>

>> No.24429  

Sure thing.

>> No.24464  


finish editing.
QC, please :)

>> No.24465  

I think you have the files set to private.

>> No.24473  

Forgot to turn on link sharing, my bad. Should be good now

>> No.24474  
File: Bedroom Telepathy QC.txt -(6994 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.


>> No.24477  


posted the revised ver.
Martin--I appreciate it so much that you took time and gave me a very detailed QC. Learned a lot :)

>> No.24478  


Good work.

You can take out the note on the credits page. I just sometimes leave my thoughts in the translation, but I don't think we need to to put that kind of thing into the release...

>> No.24480  

I thought it was funny that's why i put it, haha. I'll take it out if you don't it to be there.

>> No.24481  

Could you maybe merge 033 and 034 together?

>> No.24483  

Never done it before but i'll give it a try.

>> No.24484  


new revision with merge 33-34 and cleaned out credits :)

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>> No.24497  

Would you mind providing the PSDs? I want to do a Spanish translation. Thank you!

Also, I'll be doing the cleaning for the third story (girls complex a la mode 1-7).

>> No.24498  

Sure thing.

>> No.24503  

Frisse, could you correct the errors pointed out in these posts?

On page page 40, that line should change to "I just meant you could do that stuff with a friend—"

And on page 58 "and of my shampoo are mixing"

Sorry about this. I should've done a more thorough check before releasing them. We can update the pages with corrections on dynasty and mangadex.

>> No.24516  


I should've double-checked it too.

Here is the PSD if ya need it:

>> No.24520  
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Here's the updated page with the 'seethe' typo correction.

Updated on MangaDex.

>> No.25584  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 3 girls complex a la mode.txt -(38415 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the TL for the next chapter. I finished a draft of it a while ago, finally went over it.

>> No.25899  

New link to the raws:


>> No.25928  

Here's "girls complex a la mode"!

This one felt quite involved at times. Informative to work on, though. I had fun with it.

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