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191590 No.24069  

https://mega.nz/#F!HEZijKQS!ZRzUwIeYBIfR6X_PbZnV5A
Raws posted by an anon on /u/

>> No.24070  

>>24069
Your link points to something else.

>> No.24071  

>>24070
https://mega.nz/#F!dRwzQKTK!AGEyHQqg-os_24pBfrDCgg

>> No.24076  

Oh, this looks good. I want to translate this.

>> No.24077  

I can edit this!

>> No.24084  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 1 translation.txt -(28111 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Okay, here's the first chapter translated. Trying to translate 面倒 in all its various forms so that it fits in each specific context while still maintaining continuity was, well, a pain.

>> No.24088  

The editing was also a pain
https://mega.nz/#F!lfBilCpS!j9aXKBSvT34SLpJkTb6SSQ

The raws are pretty strange. Every single page is a different size, ranging from 976x1394, to 1344x1920. Should I scale them all down to 976x1394 for the sake of consistency, or leave them as is? Maybe I should've standardized them before editing, but I didn't.

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The chapter itself was really sweet. I like when stories take a sex positive approach. The humour was great too.

>> No.24091  

>>24088

On page 30, that should be "it's not just a whim". You're missing the "not".

Other than that, I think it looks good.

>> No.24092  

>>24091

Oh, I guess I was actually the one to leave that out of my translation. Sorry, my bad!

>> No.24093  

>>24088
The raws are actually from a public site.

>> No.24094  

Fixed p30 and standardized the pages to 976px width. There's some minor variation in the height (~5px) but I figure that's fine.
https://mega.nz/#F!wWY1DCKC!BKLfI1E2E_o9ivhnhOry5w

>> No.24095  

>>24094

Okay. This just needs the credits page and it's ready to go.

>> No.24096  

>>24095
Added credits page!

>> No.24102  

>>24094
Released.
https://yuri-project.net/i-dont-know-why-but-i-suddenly-wanted-to-have-sex-with-my-coworker-who-sits-next-to-me/

>> No.24349  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 2 bedroom telepahty translation.txt -(33818 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's a translation for the next story.

>> No.24412  

I can do the editing of the next story if no one will :>

>> No.24429  

>>24412
Sure thing.

>> No.24464  

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YOfV1yOgHtqdXzWRvlFB4PSOVIUnFWQk/view?usp=sharing

finish editing.
QC, please :)

>> No.24465  

>>24464
I think you have the files set to private.

>> No.24473  

Forgot to turn on link sharing, my bad. Should be good now

>> No.24474  
File: Bedroom Telepathy QC.txt -(6994 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>24464

>> No.24477  

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h6OZvPcSr8jb5UsSicrY3vt3AGzfBDoe/view?usp=sharing

posted the revised ver.
Martin--I appreciate it so much that you took time and gave me a very detailed QC. Learned a lot :)

>> No.24478  

>>24477

Good work.

You can take out the note on the credits page. I just sometimes leave my thoughts in the translation, but I don't think we need to to put that kind of thing into the release...

>> No.24480  

I thought it was funny that's why i put it, haha. I'll take it out if you don't it to be there.

>> No.24481  

>>24474
Could you maybe merge 033 and 034 together?

>> No.24483  

Never done it before but i'll give it a try.

>> No.24484  

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LrnCzYvneDId0ILYqACpKQO2UJQpeQKw/view?usp=sharing

new revision with merge 33-34 and cleaned out credits :)

>> No.24491  

>>24484

Released.

>> No.24497  

>>24094
Would you mind providing the PSDs? I want to do a Spanish translation. Thank you!

Also, I'll be doing the cleaning for the third story (girls complex a la mode 1-7).

>> No.24498  

>>24497
Sure thing.
https://mega.nz/folder/Ra5mXYJI#qK9RNwFXepQ-wWdxaaUYug

>> No.24503  

Frisse, could you correct the errors pointed out in these posts?
>>24499
>>24500

On page page 40, that line should change to "I just meant you could do that stuff with a friend—"

And on page 58 "and of my shampoo are mixing"

Sorry about this. I should've done a more thorough check before releasing them. We can update the pages with corrections on dynasty and mangadex.

>> No.24516  

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GfLlMlao_uXK3y3oO1P6eo4cylycnhqN/view?usp=sharing

updated.
I should've double-checked it too.

Here is the PSD if ya need it:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Q36R3RTLJZmnvsruRqRc5a6czo4RY__9?usp=sharing

>> No.24520  
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567878

Here's the updated page with the 'seethe' typo correction.

>>24516
Updated on MangaDex.

>> No.25584  
File: totsuzen nantonaku 3 girls complex a la mode.txt -(38415 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the TL for the next chapter. I finished a draft of it a while ago, finally went over it.

>> No.25899  

New link to the raws:

https://mega.nz/file/PAY3UTYY#JwJ8TyYTZgsxG-SwDqXLDlIkZ9HVuFoq3_ijQa1r-F8

>> No.25928  

>>25584
Here's "girls complex a la mode"!
https://mega.nz/folder/IaglgBIL#VsqzI2g_b9kNuLWJZWGZQQ

This one felt quite involved at times. Informative to work on, though. I had fun with it.

>> No.25975  
File: girls complex qc.txt -(750 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's a few changes. Some lines that turned out a little awkward, and some typoes. Really nice work on this, the sfx look great.

>> No.25976  

>>25975
All changes made! Thanks for the kind words.

>> No.25980  

>>25976
Credits page added. Should be good to go unless anyone spots anything!

>> No.25998  

>>25980

Released.



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