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File: [Morishima Akiko] Motto Hanjuku Joshi, Chapter 8 (Galette No.13).png -(1017308 B, 2220x3106) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
1017308 No.24098  

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/y68muxx5s1z3s2z

>> No.24100  

I'll get on this soon.

>> No.24119  
File: motto_ch8.txt -(10436 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>24100

Is this soon?

At any rate, I wanted to draw attention to one portion that seemed fairly strange to me:

> [9/16 (123_1.png)]
> あっ サーブル(※)用の剣だ
> Oh, a weapon for saber*.
> ※フェンシングの標目のひとつ
> *One of the ways to get into fencing

As far as I can tell 標目 isn't a fencing term, or used to designate different fencing events. Armed with my dictionary, I've rendered a translation into something that, as far as I can tell, is as awkward as the original. But my Japanese isn't that good, and I wouldn't be surprised if I'm missing something here.

>> No.24120  

>>24119
The kanji is 種目.

>> No.24121  

>>24120

Dang, that's embarrassing. Not the first time it's happened, either.

Correction:

> [9/16 (123_1.png)]
> あっ サーブル(※)用の剣だ
> Oh, a weapon for saber*.
> ※フェンシングの種目のひとつ
> *One of the events in fencing
>> No.24122  

Time again already? I will get started.

>> No.24145  

Still working on this, slowly. I did not get taken by Corona-chan yet.

>> No.24158  
File: mhj08_28.png -(386420 B, 1078x622) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
386420

I think there is a missing dialogue bubble translation here. Page 128.

>> No.24159  

>>24158

It looks like that bubble just has an ellipsis in it.

>> No.24166  

I did not feel the need to change the magazine titles since they're just nonsense anyway.
catbox.moe is having issues so I had to find a new file dropper.
https://gofile.io/?c=6us09Y

>> No.24170  
File: motto_8qc1.txt -(2593 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>24166

Here are some comments; mostly punctuation, a couple typos, and a little lining.

>> No.24174  

>>24170
Here is the update: https://gofile.io/?c=ABFxGv

>> No.24175  

>>24174

It looks like the changes on pages 116_1, 117_1, and 118_1 got lost somehow.

Also:

127_1

In that case, you should be good, but hey- -> In that case, you should be good, but hey— (It looks like the emdash here is like an emdash character at the width of a hyphen. I think what we want here is a hyphen set to 200% width.)

>> No.24180  

>>24175
The bolding in this font is barely noticeable and the hyphens do look like emdashes. I even bolded the 200% width hyphen so it does not look so thin.
I can give you the PSD if you want to mess with it.
https://gofile.io/?c=3BniqF

>> No.24181  

>>24180

I think this is good to go.

Thank you for all your work.

Hopefully we can get this admin business figured out in short order and get this released.

>> No.24198  

Released.



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