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425511 No.24267  


Ch 1 Raws: https://mega.nz/folder/kDJFlCqJ#UCRF6Ast7tLwB0mIe8PWvQ

>> No.24269  

This looks good. I'll translate it.

>> No.24270  

Ah, right, I'll do the editing!

I may not redraw all the SFX since it's in full colour. If someone has experience redrawing colour pages and would like to help out, feel free. Otherwise I'll make due.

>> No.24276  

Here's the upscaled version. I hope it's good enough to use it for editing.

>> No.24281  

These were a lot easier to work with, thanks! Do you need me to provide the raws in order for you to upscale them? Just in case, here's ch 2: https://mega.nz/folder/4PRxAKpR#hSzJqxKZ4Li5plnD1PsbKg

>> No.24288  

Thanks. I appreciate it. Here's the upscaled version.

>> No.24294  
File: kimi ni tsumugu bouhaku chapter 1 translation.txt -(22098 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation for chapter 1.

I'll get started on 2 next.

>> No.24307  

Here's Ch 1 for QC.

I'm not completely satisfied with the font choices. I'll have to look into it a bit more. Any input on the fonts would be very helpful.

>> No.24309  
File: kimi ni tsumugu bouhaku chapter 2 translation.txt -(11782 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation for chapter two.

>> No.24314  

Two changes I want to make:

Page 7

change to
even if I do awfully, I don't want to give up.

Page 8

change to
I think that just proves how serious you are.
>> No.24315  


>> No.24323  


Okay, I think this good to go. Just add a credits page and I'll release it, unless anyone else has any comments.

>> No.24327  


>> No.24350  

Here's the upscaled version of chapter 3.

>> No.24353  

Here's chapter 2 for QC!

This was a good chapter. I'm very curious what it is about Haruka's past that keeps hanging over her head. Surely it can't be anything that bad, right?

The redrawing was incredibly time consuming. Some pages took hours. I will just say that I'm glad it's monthly.

>> No.24355  

Fix the resolution of the pages. All of them should be 1360x1920.

>> No.24356  

The upscaled pages provided are 1280x1808.

The resolution of the raws on Storia Dash are lower for Ch 2 than they were for Ch 1.

>> No.24357  

Oh, you are right. I didn't even notice that. So fix only page 7,8,9,10. They are low res with ugly compression artifacts.

>> No.24358  

Ah, good catch, thanks. Updated

>> No.24359  

Any chances the cleaner could upload the clean version? I want to do a Spanish translation, and it would be infinitely helpful. I just don't see a need to clean it again if it has already been done so. I'd credit them of course. Thank you.

>> No.24361  

Save those pages as jpg. Besides that everything looks good to me.

>> No.24363  


Sure! Here are the PSD files for Ch 1:

And for Ch 2:

>> No.24365  

Woah, thank you! Though, I was so excited to start I actually went ahead and already did the cleaning of all the raws haha. I also have cleaned all the pages for Chapter 3 (they are 18, right? the ones in >>24350). I'm translating Chapter 1 right now so they don't even have any text. If you want them, I can upload them, just hit me up.

>> No.24368  

Sure, that'd be helpful, thanks!

>> No.24369  


>> No.24370  

Uploading them now! It'll take a while 'cause my internet is really slow and shitty, but I'll have them up in a bit. Also, did you do anything to the 'upscaled&denoised' raws? Because the colours in those look a bit different from the raws, but your version does look like the raws. Thank you. (Yours are a bit... darker maybe? In parts like the clothes and stuff).

>> No.24374  

Here you go: https://mega.nz/folder/q4UUjC4J#c4Cm4AiYs33sdTkjAlu1sA
Don't worry about the colour thing I said, PS had messed up my RGB profiles.

>> No.24476  
File: kimi ni tsumugu bouhaku chapter 3 translation.txt -(13275 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's chapter 3 translation. And chapter 4 is coming out in two days.

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