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414120 No.24387  

One-shot, 16 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/y7uuycks

>> No.24408  

This looks lovely! I would love to edit this if someone can translate it.

>> No.24425  
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TL

>> No.24445  

Thanks for the translation!
Here are the files for QC.

>> No.24457  
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It's my first time QC so I might've missed some stuff, but pretty much looks great to me. just a bit of punctuation.

and for the HA HA! - I think no space is better or "lol" but not sure if so probably need a second opinion on that.

Thanks for the hard work!

>> No.24458  

Thanks for the QC! I changed some other stuff too and here is the new link.

>> No.24459  

Ahh I forgot to add that I thought that these should all be hyphens. I'm not sure though since English isn't my native language. I just left them like this for now.

>> No.24461  
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English is not my first language either, and I think hyphens are fine if that is what you prefer.
I think this is pretty good, got some nitpicky things which optional if you wanna do it.
but can't find anything that needs to be changed, just add credit page and should this be okay :)
Thanks for your hard work!

>> No.24462  

New link is up. Thank you for your hard work too.

>> No.24463  

I think this is good for release. :)

>> No.24470  

>>24462

Released.

>> No.24543  
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412782

There was a typo on this page.

>> No.24548  

>>24543

I updated the link on the site and made the request on Dynasty. Just curious, what was the typo? I tried comparing the pages and couldn't tell.

>> No.24551  

Thanks for the update! It was geting -> getting. It took me a while to find that typo too lol



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