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File: hiza no ue no cool girl 146.jpeg -(371400 B, 1359x1920) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
371400 No.24688  

https://mega.nz/file/edQmDKCS#vcUZrNc9atF4QTZ7yVNGHM74T7HsEhMGi_WAfAVIGuw

16 pages. A side story/continuation from That Girl Will Make Me a Woman and That Red on Me.

I guess that means whoever worked on That Red on Me has dibs if they want to work on this one. If not, I can translate this eventually.

>> No.24712  

I can edit this

>> No.24719  

Are you wanting to translate it? I don't mind if you want to do it. I haven't looked at it, so I don't have any feelings one way or another. If you don't really care, I can take a crack at it.

>> No.24720  

>>24719

Go for it.

>> No.24721  

I'll try to have the translation done in the next couple of days.

>> No.24722  
File: coolgirl.txt -(7571 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Here's the translation. It went pretty quick and easy, but if there are any issues or anything that could be improved, please let me know.

I'm thinking she probably falls asleep at the end of page 152.

>> No.24753  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1aCoujv0X8DPMID4Xvpi75DMQUb2p1ePm?usp=sharing

You mean Towada? I don't know. I bet she was faking it.

>> No.24755  

>>24753
p16
"はああ..." SFX is unreplaced

I think it might be helpful to add an ellipsis to the end of "or reality", since the next narrative text block starts a new sentence.

Also, you can credit schuyguy for the raws.

>> No.24756  

>>24753
Good work! It looks nice.

The only thing I noticed was on page 11, there's a vertical ellipsis. I think it's fine like that, but I thought I'd point it out in case it wasn't intentional.

Oh, and I meant Haru. You don't see anymore of the train backgrounds, and a bunch of bubbles start appearing, so it seems like that part is a dream.

>> No.24757  

Updated link

> Also, you can credit schuyguy for the raws.

Ahh, fixed, sorry about that.

> The only thing I noticed was on page 11, there's a vertical ellipsis. I think it's fine like that, but I thought I'd point it out in case it wasn't intentional.

I changed it to the font I was using (mighty zeo) and I also changed the exclamation points on pg15 to match as well.

>> No.24760  

>>24757
Page 16 doesn't seem to be updated. There's a missing sfx, and Martin suggested sticking an ellipsis after "reality" so the flow of text is clearer.

>> No.24761  

>>24760

Ahh, you're right. I forgot to export it. My bad. It should be there now.

>> No.24762  

>>24761
Awesome! I don't see any issues.

>> No.24768  

>>24761

Released.



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