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Hana ni Arashi Volume 8 is out, I'll be translating this.


>> No.24906  

I'd very much like to keep editing this!

>> No.24909  
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Okay, here's the TL for Chapter 85.

>> No.24912  

Here we are! Ch 85

It's nice to work on this again. This was a fun chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of the volume!

>> No.24914  


Great! This one looks fine to me. Anyone else want to look it over?

>> No.24916  

Added credits page! I'll update it if anyone else stops by.

>> No.24920  

This could be a wery sweet anime, if adapted..

>> No.24922  
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Here's the TL for 86.

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>> No.24964  

Here's a mega link, I'll just add my TLs to this folder as I get them ready.


>> No.24968  


Ch 86

Hi, here's chapter 86. I never edited a manga before so if there is any mistake I'm sorry.

>> No.24969  


Generally the way we work here is that the editor and translator who've been working on a series have priority on continuing to work on subsequent chapters. As you can see in this thread, Martin already stated his intention to work on this volume. It's best to ask first if you want to work on a series that someone else has already been working on, to avoid duplication of effort.

>> No.24970  


oh! I'm really sorry, I should have asked before. It's been a while since a chapter was uploaded so I thought it was abandoned or something like that. I'm sorry.

>> No.24971  


Hey, yeah, I'm really sorry about that. I had to take some time away due to hardware issues. I should've mentioned it here so people knew what was going on.

>> No.24972  


No need to apologize. Thanks for offering to help. If you see something else you'd like to work on that hasn't been claimed, go ahead and post there. Or if you could look over an already edited chapter, we could always use more eyes checking for issues.

>> No.24973  


Your file appears to be missing page 19.

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>> No.24975  


Could you change two things?

That "blegh" in the top panel of page 18 should be "pfft". And that bubble on that page "That's how you move..." should be "So that's how you move..."


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>> No.25016  

Here's 87!

This was a really great chapter. The comedic and romantic moments both landed so well! It was a pain to edit though.

>> No.25017  


Nice work. I think this just needs a credits page and it's good to go.

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>> No.25036  

Here's chapter 88!

>> No.25037  


I think this looks good to go.

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>> No.25052  

Here's 89!

>> No.25053  


Looks good. Here are some changes, just things I think were a little awkward in my script:

Page 52

>Huh? But then wouldn't just a school in Sendai be fine? You don't have to go all the way to Tokyo—
>Huh? But then couldn't you just go tour a school in Sendai? You don't have to go all the way to Tokyo—

Page 57

>Umm... "Nevermind your grades, you're actually taking your future seriously!?"
>Umm... "I don't care if you can't get in, I'm just glad you're taking your future seriously!"

Page 59

>Today let's buy our bullet train tickets on the way home.
>Let's buy our bullet train tickets on the way home.
>Those three still haven't found out.
>Kumako, Asumi, and Rei don't know.

Page 60

>She's Abe, on the volleyball team,
>Abe, from the volleyball team?
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>> No.25086  


I think this just needs a credits page and is ready to go.

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