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File: index-105_1.png -(2011010 B, 2150x3035) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
2011010 No.25429  

This is the short extra chapter that was in the previous volume of Galette.

>> No.25430  
File: My Cute Little Kitten Extra Chapter Translation.txt -(8975 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

And the translation.

>> No.25431  

Sweet, I'll get started on this!

>> No.25437  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1ZvjqdP-IO9oa5DGtSxkbTGRKhE7C2uiI?usp=sharing

>> No.25440  

>>25437
Just a few very minor things:

p2
"that would hatch into a little bird[...]" Might help to move up a few pixels.

"given into / my curiosity / and peeled / open the / shell." -> "given / into my / curiosity / and peeled / open the / shell."

p4
panel 2 - Aside text "Well,". The comma here is getting lost in the background. I think the options are either to increase the stroke, or move the text around so it's not in the dots. Up to you which would work better.

>> No.25443  

Updated the pages.

As for that "Well,", I just bundled it with the other text block. Those darn polka dots!



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