One-shot. 28 pages.RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/?d2jrjcaa9qikl4kTL: http://www.mediafire.com/?kq59xfd08f72he0
One-shot. 28 pages.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/?d2jrjcaa9qikl4kTL: http://www.mediafire.com/?kq59xfd08f72he0
Cleanshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/166ql5ZS-btMBhb7C0s-J9uz57fuZ_S40?usp=sharing
Cleans
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/166ql5ZS-btMBhb7C0s-J9uz57fuZ_S40?usp=sharing
I raise dead yuri stories from the grave. I am the yuri necromancer. Trigger warning: Suicidal ideation. Content warning: disposable pop girls, professional tsundere, fear the airhead.
Editing complete here too.https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1BzFDPj8QCQkvWfO7sivWBLvGw4z_2Ret
>>26259Just a few minor things and it should be good editing wise.265.4"[...] but mayu you're so slim and super[...]" maybe increase the tracking on the L in "slim"? Kinda reads like "sum" atm.266.1"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?274.1"You give up waytoo easily." -> "You give up way too easily."
>>26259Just a few minor things and it should be good editing wise.
265.4"[...] but mayu you're so slim and super[...]" maybe increase the tracking on the L in "slim"? Kinda reads like "sum" atm.
266.1"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?
274.1"You give up waytoo easily." -> "You give up way too easily."
>>26301266.1"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?--> you could use "Spaced out" or any similar phrase.
>>26301
--> you could use "Spaced out" or any similar phrase.
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