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File: Vol. 8_0263.png -(201501 B, 1773x2490) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
201501 No.4772  

One-shot. 28 pages.

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/?d2jrjcaa9qikl4k
TL: http://www.mediafire.com/?kq59xfd08f72he0

>> No.23306  

Cleans

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/166ql5ZS-btMBhb7C0s-J9uz57fuZ_S40?usp=sharing

>> No.26237  
File: Goodbye To The Miniskirt.txt -(8104 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

I raise dead yuri stories from the grave. I am the yuri necromancer. Trigger warning: Suicidal ideation. Content warning: disposable pop girls, professional tsundere, fear the airhead.

>> No.26259  

Editing complete here too.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1BzFDPj8QCQkvWfO7sivWBLvGw4z_2Ret

>> No.26301  

>>26259
Just a few minor things and it should be good editing wise.

265.4
"[...] but mayu you're so slim and super[...]" maybe increase the tracking on the L in "slim"? Kinda reads like "sum" atm.

266.1
"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?

274.1
"You give up waytoo easily." -> "You give up way too easily."

>> No.26302  

>>26301

266.1
"You totally messed up the dance! You spaced it off again. Again!" Should this be "spaced off"?

--> you could use "Spaced out" or any similar phrase.



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