Episode 2.
My listening comprehension isn't very good (which is why these transcriptions from K01 are invaluable; thanks again), but I did happen to notice a few slight discrepancies in the Japanese script for this episode.
それより美夜さん、そんなにたくさん、んーと、ええっ!
There seems to be a こそ missing here.
それより美夜さんこそ、そんなにたくさん、んーと、ええっ!
初めてよ。少し飲んでみてもいいかしら?
Should be
初めて見たわ。少し飲んでみてもいいかしら?
Here are my notes on the translation itself. Some of these are just conjecture on my part if I didn't understand something well myself, so anyone please feel free to correct me if I've made any incorrect assumptions.
午前の授業をサボったと思ったら、また中庭にいたのね。
Maybe she stayed in the courtyard and skipped class this morning again.
My interpretation of this is:
I suspected she’d skipped morning classes, only to find her in the courtyard again.
It seems to be more of an assertion than conjecture. Like saying "I suspected as much."
完全に、計画的犯行ね。
This is a scheme, no matter how you look at it.
Calling it a "scheme" makes it sound like it's got some ulterior motive.
I interpreted it as just pointing out that Miya intentionally planned the whole thing in advance (as evidenced by her bringing her lunch with her).
So this must have been her plan all along.
注意しなくちゃ。
I have to take caution.
In this case, wouldn't this be more like "I have to give her a warning"?
I’d better give her a talking to, is how I translated it.
誰も友達がいないから、きっといつもそうなのね。
I'm sure she doesn't have any real friend.
Is more like "Because she has no friends, I'm sure she's always like this."
She doesn’t have any friends, so I’ll bet she always eats alone.
私なんて、パン二つとイチゴ牛乳だけなのに。
Compared to that, I only have two kinds of bread and a strawberry milk.
Should that be "Two kinds" or just "Two pieces"?
All I’ve got is a couple of pieces of bread and a strawberry milk.
そんなガツガツ食べていないのに。
And yet you didn't gobble food up fiercely or anything.
I'm not certain of this one. At first, I also thought she was referring to Miya, but based on something Risa says near the end, I now think she's referring to herself, saying she's not eating as fast as Miya.
I’m not anywhere near that fast.
こういうときは、わたくしが箸で、あーんとかして、食べさせた方がいいのかしら?
I only have one pair of chopsticks. I wonder if I should lend it, or I had better feed you myself?
Should be more like:
It’s just that, in these situations, shouldn’t you hold your mouth open so I can feed you from my chopsticks?
>>5247
I think it's well enough understood by English speaking audiences that "Strawberry Milk" is just strawberry-flavored, and doesn't actually contain strawberries.
牛乳とイチゴをジューサーにかけたものとは、また違う味ねえ。
It tastes different from putting milk and strawberry juice together.
Only a slight change:
It tastes completely different from putting milk and strawberries into a juicer.
今日はそれでも遅い方だったわ、璃紗さんと一緒だったから。
Today has been slow ever since I was together with Risa-san.
I'm not certain I understand this sentence correctly, but it sounds as though Miya is saying she slowed herself down (once again) to come down to Risa's level.
I even slowed down my eating today since I was with you, Risa-san.
私も早く食べて、午後の授業の準備でもしようかしら。
I should eat quickly too. Is there anything I should prepare for classes this afternoon?
This doesn't seem like a question, but just a volitional statement.
I should hurry up and finish too, so I can get ready for this afternoon’s classes.
ん? そういえば、このパンとイチゴ牛乳、さっきまで美夜さんが……
こ、これって、もしかして、あの、間接キス?
べ、別にそんなの気にするほどでもないことよね。
なんでもないわ。 うくっ(食べる)
Mm? Come to think of it, this bread and strawberry milk, just now with Miya-san…
Th-That was… Could that be, by any chance, an indirect… kiss?
I-I am not going to worry about something like that.
*It was nothing. *Omph**
This looks mostly fine, but I included the whole paragraph since Saluki had a request to check it.
The way this is currently phrased makes it sound like Risa is thinking of an indirect kiss that may have already occurred when Miya ate off her food and drank from her milk.
But the way I interpret it is that she's concerned about the indirect kiss that's about to take place once she finishes the bread and milk Miya just had her mouth on a moment ago.
Huh? Now that I think about it, Miya-san just had her mouth on this bread and strawberry milk...
Is- Is this what they call an... an indirect kiss?
W- Well it’s nothing worth getting myself worked up about.
It doesn’t really matter.
Once again, I have included my complete translation as a separate file for anyone's personal use or for additional comparison if anybody would like.
As before, I have only pointed out the significant differences in my comments above.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/q863548lq543n6p/Risa-Miya_Theater_02.rtf