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487705 No.9522  

http://www.mediafire.com/folder/nngin9gcc4vdj/Asterisk_of_the_Darkess

Only a two chapter series.

>> No.9544  
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300dpi raws so you won't use the 2000px files I output for personal reading. Not my scans.

01: https://mega.co.nz/#!s85WHBRL!Wpk1PUn0e-wInsRZY016YBU-WMoYRspZMzrRygrgOh4
02: https://mega.co.nz/#!wwxBTJ6D!UK0gYwp7CsrLu0C2cKWuwDjCqwgkV7MN5mUnuBr3yvU

Feel free to rehost.

>> No.9547  

omg! I am always exited to work with Momoto XD she's amazing artist and human being. if its translated ill edit but I saw it was 40 pg 0_0; i hope i have train enough to take this monster of a beauty it looks nice!!

>> No.9553  

Someone with the actual magazine can probably give a good evaluation, but I think the raws might be way overcropped on one side, at least for the second chapter.

>> No.9574  

Kimi Koi Limit sequel, huh.

>>9553
Chapter 1 is fine, chapter 2 is overcropped.

>> No.13208  

I'll take this too, though it'll be awhile before I can get to it; so, if anyone else desperately wants it, feel free to take it.

>> No.17402  
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>> No.17408  
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The debt is paid

>> No.17415  
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>> No.19472  

Are these raws better?
http://www.mediafire.com/download/r52cjqyc0lbjx4b

>> No.19713  

No one wants to edit this? Alrighty then. I will do it.

>> No.21400  

I'm working on this.

>> No.21530  

>>21400
How is it going?

>> No.21531  

>>21530
I've finished 25 pages so far.

>> No.21540  

>>21531
I see. Thank you for working on this. I was the one >>19713 who was supposed to do it, but after I accidentaly deleted my folder with 56 already cleaned pages I lost it and just couldn't restart. One more time. Thank you.

>> No.21653  
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>>17402
It's missing this bubble.

>> No.21654  

>>21653
What will you do? You okay with not going home?

>> No.21656  
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>>21654
Thanks, Procyon.
It's also missing Ten's thought text on the right from this page.

>> No.21657  

>>21656
That's an extra line for the magazine, not her thoughts.

Kindness that stabs.

>> No.21658  

>>21656
Wait, are you using scans from the OP? Not digital rips from this >>19472 link?

>> No.21659  

>>21657
Oh, okay.

>>21658
Uhm, yeah. I've tried that link but it says "This file is currently set to private."

>> No.21660  

>>21659
Oh crap, I forgot to set it to public. Now it's fixed.

>> No.21661  

>>21660
Well, that would have saved me the time of cleaning all that dust. lol

Here's the first part:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/wa2ac5cheknb82x/%5BMomono_Moto%5D_Dark_Asterisk.rar
Procyon, maybe you want to wait for the second part to post them together? I don't know when I will work on that tho, it might take me awhile.

>> No.21662  
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>>21661

Misc. typesetting

>> No.21664  

>>21661
Sure, if you want.

>> No.22439  

>>21662
Better late than never, right?
http://www.mediafire.com/file/czgcallhgx46fzl/%255BMomono_Moto%255D_Dark_Asterisk_QCv1.rar/

http://www.mediafire.com/file/bw8r8s820of9dc5/Dark_Asterisk_ch2.rar/
Translation is missing a bubble from pg 90.

>> No.22442  

>>22439

A couple minor touch-ups for chapter 1:

0058.png

You actually brought your friend? (Center in bubble; ~8px? right, probably ~10-15px up)

Oh, is that right? How do they get bad? I'd love to see. (Center in bubble; ~10px? up, maybe ~3px right)

0080.png

I can shtill drink/more! I'm totally/oookay... -> I can/shtill drink/more! I'm/ totally/oookay... (Change lining and see if my suggestion looks okay)

>> No.22443  

>>22439

And a few touch-ups for chapter 2:

081.png

The choice I made, wasn't the wrong one. -> The choice I made wasn't the wrong one. (remove comma)

084.png

It's because I worked hard to look that way for /you/! (embolden /you/ a bit more; maybe jack the font size up one or two pts?)

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Yikes!! What the hell's with that text!? (put "Yikes!!" in the first rightmost segment of the bubble, "What the hell's with that text!?" in the leftmost part.)

>> No.22445  

>>22442
>>22443
http://www.mediafire.com/file/xmrb2cp3fw3o37s/%255BMomono_Moto%255D_Dark_Asterisk_QCv2.rar/
http://www.mediafire.com/file/e6fk8r7591idc5q/Dark_Asterisk_ch2_QCv1.rar/

>> No.22449  

>>22445

Chapter 1 is good to go.

A couple small fixes still in chapter 2:

99.png

Ten-... chan... -> Ten... chan... (remove hyphen)

100.png

I'm a nightmare right noiw. -> I'm a nightmare right now. (remove 'i')

>> No.22450  

>>22449
http://www.mediafire.com/file/1dv0sg9qv0skubc/Dark_Asterisk_ch2_QCv2.rar/

>> No.22455  

>>22450

I think this is acceptable for release.

>> No.22475  

>>22445
>>22450
Released.
https://yuri-project.net/dark-asterisk-ch01/
https://yuri-project.net/dark-asterisk-ch02/

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pg 78, "If you'd called I, would have come to get you!"

>If you's called me, I would have come to get you!
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I think this sentence needs fixing?

pg 101, "haven't able to receive"

>haven't been able to receive
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>>22478

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>>22479

>> No.22483  

>>22480
>>22481
Updated on the homepage.

>> No.22492  

ch1
pg60

>Ten's a still fragile maiden

Ten's still a fragile maiden

>that's a rare thing anymore!

that's rare nowadays!

pg61

>/rage

Is that intentional?

>> No.22494  

>>22492

I agree, the "/rage" bit seems weird. I think it might be better to remove it, and maybe use a different font on that text to express anger.

>> No.22507  
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>>22492

>Is that intentional?

Yes. That's how it was in Gulf Standard's translation and since Multiball didn't address it I assumed there was nothing wrong with it.

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>>22507
>>22494
>>22492

The original line ends with a (怒 , which Gulf Standard rendered as "/rage". This is a sort of typographical oddity that's generally more widespread in Japanese than in English. I agree that the "/emotion" rendering is unusual in Egnlish, but precisely because of that, I felt like it was important to let it through so people could see what it looks like, to have an example of what that option looks like in practice.

>> No.22510  

>>22509
I wouldn't say it's unusual, it's common in internet forums.

>> No.22511  

>>22507
Updated.

>> No.22516  

>>22507

>Ten's still a fragile maiden

Missing the "a"

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>>22516

>> No.22518  

>>22517
Updated.



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