[page].[panel] General: Make sure to run the chapter through a denoising program like waifu2x. Page 533 is missing. 511.1 "Something you once had." -> something "New release of a oneshot in the big volume!" Not a big deal or anything, but this is just an editor's blurb that can probably be removed. No worries if the redraw isn't worth the hassle. 512.4 "She can't read the mood, yeah?" move down slightly "Right!" This is handwritten in the raws if you'd like to replicate that 513.3 "Wouldn't bird be better?" -> "Wouldn't a bird be better?" typo "I want tropical fish." potentially also "I want a tropical fish." though in this case it could just be a plural 513.4 "I'd get scolded." move left slightly "Ok, well," maybe make slightly larger? 513.5 "Ah" remove the sound extension line from the raws. "Ahh" if you want to sound extend "A rabbit would be nice, huh?" make 1px larger maybe 515.1 "...It's fine by me." move down and right slightly, maybe .5px bigger? 515.2 "Just fine by me." down and right slightly 515.3 "Nene, / you always / seem so / happy, / huh?" -> "Nene, / you / always / seem so / happy, / huh?" may just be preference, your call I think the signs are a bit mixed up here The right should be "Cultural Clubs" (obscured by the bubble), and then the two below it are correct. I'd recommend borrowing the dots from "Club presentation" for the white space below "Wind Ensemble", since we can't make out what it's saying. The left should be "Athletic Clubs", and below it should be "Volleyball" on the right, and on the left, probably just write "basketball" or something. Maybe you've veered slightly too far from the source on that one. "Club prsent" should be "Student Council" according to Boke's script. 515.5 "Well, it's just-" hyphen to emdash or ellipsis 520.1 "Uh-" hyphen to emdash 520.2 "What are you..." -> "What are you—" I think the ellipsis gives the impression of a complete thought, when she's stopping abruptly. "What are you..." "Uh, what? A friend?" make both slightly bigger 520.3 "Oh, so you had plans with her?" move down slightly "No!" move left slightly 522.3 "is she trying to get back at me?" move right slightly 522.4 "But anyways, just what's with // what she said?" maybe this would feel a bit more natural as "But anyways, just what's with // *that*?" I feel like we don't need to specify "what she said" when we're immediately slapped with it mid sentence. 522.6 "I'm not doing this." move up slightly 523.5 "Let's go." move down slightly 524.3 "This way." -> "This / way." again preference 525.4 "Nene-chan," "say goodbye too." maybe make both 1 px larger? 526.4 "N..." move down slightly 527.4 "Have you decided..." move down slightly 527.5 "I have." move up and left slightly 528.1 "You mean to make me pay for myself?" move left slightly 528.2 "If you have money,[...]" move down and left slightly 528.3 "You said you have three hours." move down and left "Oh, c'mon!" I'm not sure what happened here, but something is off with the o and n. 528.7 "Ah" part of the original あ is still visible. 529.1 "It's fine." move left 1px maybe? "It's fine." "It's already dead." make both a littlte bit bigger 530.2 "Ah." move right slightly 530.4 "Don't have a trowel." move down 1px maybe? Page 533 is missing. 534.4 Sign missing TS 537.3 " "Why are you so positive all the time? " missing closing quote 540.4 "I don't / get this at / all!" -> "I don't / get this / at all!" 543.1 "Th-then" hyphen to emdash Part of the magazine text was missed when you whited it out. 543.5 "Eh!?" this feels a little overemphasized. 545.1 "You've got it all wrong." move down slightly 549.2 "Thanks for helping taking caring of it." maybe "Thanks for helping take care of it." or just "Thanks for taking care of it."?