Opening this and seeing so many suggestions may seem a bit overwhelming, so I just want to say that a lot of these suggestions are just to improve the reading experience, rather than them specifically being errors on your part. I've marked the important things like typos with three asterisks (***) so you can just skip to those if you're not concerned about the rest. If you intend to keep typesetting for a while and are looking for things to improve upon, I'd recommend reading through the rest of the suggestions, even if you don't implement them into this chapter. 036.png "Earth is such a small planet." -> Increase stroke thickness. Hard to read like this. I want / to go to / saturn / in an / escape pod -> I want / to go to / saturn / in an / escape / pod. Alternatively, saturn in / an escape / pod. *** "What do you think about I should do, Nozomi-kun?" -> I think "about" should be dropped from this sentence. 037.png "Wanna go some—where after school?" -> Should use hyphens when splitting words between lines. "Sakura~" "Come on~" -> Small thing, but the free version of CC WildWords doesn't have a ~ character. I'd recommend swapping instances of ~ to a similar font, like AnimeAce 2.0 BB. "Quit it!" -> Center text in bubble. "Quit it! Can't you see that you're bothering her?" -> Text is a few pixels larger than the rest of the page in the original. Consider scaling up the text slightly to match the raws. 038.png "And I'd / planned on / finding a / boyfriend once / I got into / high school." -> "And I'd / planned / on finding / a boyfriend / once I got / into high / school." "But the / only thing / they care / about / is how / cute I am." -> "But the / only thing / they care / about is / how cute / I am." "Oh... is that so?" -> Increase stroke thickness. "I don't get them!" -> Move up and right slightly, to center the text. 039.png "You don't / need a / boyfriend / to have a / good time / in high / school." -> You seem to have some phantom spaces in here, making some lines off center from the others. "Then, wanna do that with me?" -> Same as "Quit it!", the text should be a bit larger to match the raws. 040.png "You're right! I should date you, Nozomi-kun!" -> Significantly increase font size. Increase stroke thickness. Consider using a different font (Something like Letter-O-Matic or Zap Raygun wouldn't be bad here. Alternatively, just use CC WildWords Bold Italics.) "HAH!?" -> Center text. It's okay if it's close to the other text block, the important thing is that they are not aligned horizontally. "Tall" "Volleyball ace" "Super hot" -> Increase stroke thickness. Also, consider making the text a bit larger to match the raws. "Volleyball" can be hyphenated into "Volley- / ball", and "Super hot" can be moved down a bit, in order to accomodate a slightly larger text size. "We can just pretend if you want!" -> Move down a few pixels to center in bubble. "Please, please~<3" -> Another small thing (no need to adjust this if you don't feel like it), but you can borrow hearts from other fonts to match the look of the rest of the text. I personally use the heart from "Love Marker" when using CC WildWords. 041.png Missed the っ when redrawing the lower top left panel. "Hey everyone! Yesterday, we started dating!" -> Text should be larger to match raws. Seems like the line spacing is a bit off. Also, Consider using a different font to match raws. Maybe something like KG Love Somebody, written in all caps? 042.png Bottom panel boxes -> Center text in boxes. 043.png "Ah- That nail polish is so cute!" -> Increase font size, add stroke outline. Consider using a different font. "What's there to be sorry about? Hey, let's match our nails!" -> Center text in bubble. Maybe change "Match / Our nails!" to "Match our / nails!" "I've always wanted to try that" -> Move text up slightly to center in bubble. 044.png *** "...No, it'd just be too weird for me to wear something cute like" -> Missing the word "this!" at the end. "It'll be fun!" Line spacing is a bit large. "I'll get to wear the things I like together with the person I like!" Consider making the text a big larger. 045.png "Nozomi-kun, I super like you <3" -> Hearts don't count as punctuation, so consider adding a ! or . to this line. "And Having a boyfriend I can have fun with wandering around a shop together is the best <3" Same deal as above. Also, the line spacing is a bit large. 047.png Add stroke outline to top left panels. Center text in bottom boxes. 049.png Increase font size in the two speech bubbles, and in the bottom narrative text box. 050.png "It's like some kind of telepathy." "Yeah, it is." -> Increase font size, center in respective bubbles. "Say Yui," -> Center in bubble. "Nozomi / -kun, / do you / like / cream / cheese?" -> the hyphen should be attached to the upper line. "I love it" -> Significantly increase font size. 051.png *** "...Then it's date." -> "...Then it's a date." "I want to chat even more." "I want to see you right away." -> Add stroke outline. "Dating a girl has been nothing but bright and beautiful." -> Increase stroke thickness. 055.png "Now it's like we're the only people in the universe." -> Significantly increase font size. 056.png *** For some reason you've stopped using anti-aliasing starting on this page. (Marked by the aa in the text options.) It should be set to smooth at all times. It looks quite bad without it. 057.png "And Nozomi-kun is thinking, more." -> Increase stroke thickness. 058.png "We're feeling the same thing" -> Add a full stop. 060.png "The stars aren't visible tonight." Significantly increase font size. The original text is black with a white stroke, rather than white text. 063.png "Sensei!" "Sakura-san looks sick, I'll take her to the nurse!" -> Increase font size to match raws. 065.png "You disliked what we did yesterday?" -> Increase font size to match raws. 066.png "We're / both girls. / I can tell / you've been acting / strance since / yesterday." -> "We're both / girls. I can / tell you've / been acting / strange since / yesterday." *** "I guess there's is a downside" -> "I guess there is a downside" 068.png "I can tell by your face that you like me so much you can't bear it!" -> Significantly increase font size. 070.png Significantly increase font size in middle panel bubbles. 071.png "Right now her trembling hands are telling me just how brave she's being" -> Add stroke outline. 072.png "Only we know" -> Center text in bubble. "We'll stick all these precious things into a basket." -> Center text in box. Increase stroke thickness. "Low-Oxygen kisses" -> Center text in box. 073.png "A secret communication just between us." -> Significantly increase font size.