pg95 >panel 2,box1 remove comma >last panel, only bubble comma after "school" >last panel, bottom aside add period to the end pg100 >p2, bottom right bubble R.. Rika-chan? -> R...Rika-chan? pg101 >p3,bubble 1 Pl... please -> Pl...Please >p4,b1 perver... -> Perver... pg104 >p1,b1 and b2 remove space after the hyphens capitalize the w's in "wh-" >p4, second aside (left of the second bubble) comma after "clothes"