-p1- Because I... => Left. -p2- All the text needs to be a different font. Also "someone like Aoi [...]" is larger than the rest. -p3- It's an evening => Right a tick. Haa => Remove the dash or redraw it so the line is not coming out of the bottom of the text. -p4- Do not left align narration text. This applies to all cases. What the heck? => Different font. "Going off as she" => "Running off as she" and a different font. "to say things like that" => "to say those kinds of things" "Like I thought" => "Just as I thought" -p5- "This book! So this was" => "This book! So that's" Next three bubbles => Thought font. If nothing / Those days => Thought font. come any time => come any time[.] What am I => Left. -p6- It's not use => Thought font. Trouble sleeping? => Text is left aligned. -p7- I am the sleep / I've come to => Left. -p8- Wha- => Different font. What's up with you? => Redundant white space after "with." And move left. I shall hear => Right. daze.. => daze..[.] Where is this? => Text is left aligned. -p9- Well,/don't just/stand there. => Well,/don't/just/stand/there. Please,/take a seat,/Uematsu Aoi. => Please,/take a/seat,/Uematsu/Aoi. Uematsu of the = Redundant white space. Ponymatsu for short => Redundent white space. No wait => Different font. Now please => Tick right. Grr.... => Grr... -p10- You can call her => Redundant white space. -p11- Even back in => Left. She's got the => Right. -p12- Nowadays => Right. snore.. => snore..[.] You snoring over there?! => You seem to be snoring!! That line specifically also needs to be a different font. "Weren't you the one" is still is normal dialog font. "Oh!!" => "Huh?!" and Different font. -p13- "It was just so immature that I..." => The answer was just so obvious that I..." "Your character's slipping a little, isn't it?" => "Not staying in character too well, are you?" R-Right... => Tick left. "sex" => Different font than the rest of the text in that bubble. What the hell are => Another different font. Where did that come => Typeset it horizontally. Maybe a different font as well. Something more rounded. -p14- "you deprived cat" => "you depraved cat" Also a different font. "Even someone" => Don't left align the text. "Say it one more time, louder!" => "Say it again, and could you be a bit louder?!" "Like I said, se..." => Break this up into two lines like it is in the original text. And use this phrasing. "Fine, you got it!!" "I said se—" "mumble mumble" => Typeset/rotate it horizontally. -p15- "Well" and "Arg shut up" => Different fonts. -p16- "Really, just go" => Different font.