most of my suggestions are about shifting text down slightly lol. It's possible I just have a different taste. page-panel-bubble/box(if multiple): suggestion 0001-1-b2: move text down a bit. 0001-3: This sounds stilted to me. I would write the same sentence as "I wish I could go outside someday." 0004-1-b1: nudge down. 0008-4-b3: nudge down. 0010-2-b1: move down. b2: nudge down. 0010-5-b2: nudge down. 0011-4-b1: move down. b2: nudge down. 0012-1 nudge down 0012-6-b1: move down. 0015-1-b1: nudge down. 0016-7-b1: nudge down. b2: nudge down. 0018-2-b1: move down. 0018-6-b1: nudge down. 0023-2-b1: I think this looks better nudged right. The raw shifts the text slightly closer to the center of the implied full bubble. 0024-2-b2: "research lad" -> "research lab"? 0024-7: same as 0023, though the raw doesn't do it here, so your call. 0027-5: I would change how you redrew the black blobs between the tops of the two Os and between the K and B. As is, once you notice them, they look out of place. 0030-5-b1: nudge down. 0041-1: teeny nudge down. 0041-2: move down. 0041-3: nudge down.