p03 Untranslated text. "Seesaw Game" "Takemiya Jin" p05 panel 1 "...wa... / wait...!" These should be aligned more to their corresponding boxes. It may be best to adjust it to something like "Wa... / Wait...!" You can split "Wait...!" like "Wait / ...!" as well. p08 panel 2 "Let's see Which one is she?" Add some form of punctuation after "Let's see", maybe an ellpsis. p09 panel 3 "No way? / A prem- / onition / dream...?" -> "No way? / A pre- / monition / dream...?" Move hyphen to syllable break. panel 4 "Hmm" the two sets of || on either side of the original shouldn't be erased. p011 panel 1 "You / wanna get / revenge / on that / girl, right?" -> "You / wanna get / revenge on / that girl, / right?" panel 2 "Wha? It's not that?" and "It's not!" both have mistakenly erased the sets of double lines. I think they're being used here to help frame the text, almost like open bubbles. p012 panel 3 "You look different[...]" the three lines there are not part of the text and shouldn't be erased. panel 4 "I'm / sure / you've / forg- / otten / me..." -> "I'm / sure / you've / for- / gotten / me..." Move hyphen to syllable break. panel 6 "She completely[...]" Framing lines removed. p013 panel 1 "Whoa..." Framing lines removed. You can also move them to either side of your text to make it fit better. panel 3 "So w hat can we do..." sweat droplet removed panel 4 "Like in sports Or Studying or something." period after sports panel 5 "That's it!!" -> "That's / it!!" and make a bit bigger p014 panel 1 "Coo- / king" -> "Cook- / ing" move hyphen to syllable break "Sports / comp- / etition" -> "Sports / com- / petition" move hyphen to syllable break. Same with "Art comp-etition". panel 2 "And to top it off, she's too cool!" blush lines removed panel 4 "ka-clunk" make bigger p015 panel 2 "N..." blush lines removed panel 3 "So full of yourself!" "Oh, really now?" framing lines removed p016 panel 2 "Aha!" move subtitle off of original panel 5 all sets of floating text have framing lines removed p018 panel 1 "kya" blush lines removed p21 panel 4 "Ah, I brought[...]" "Wha?" framing lines removed p022 panel 3 "So she can run[...]" sweat droplets removed p023 panel 5 "fever.." missing dot in ellipsis p026 panel 1-2 "Ah..." "I was dreaming, huh..." italicize panel 5 "I wasn't left behind..." make a bit bigger p029 panel 3 "...Yeah" missing ending punctuation p030 panel 2 "Yeah" missing punctuation p031 panel 2 "Oh? / You two / made up?" -> "Oh? / You two / made / up?" p032 pnael 2 "irked" framing lines removed panel 3 "Conti- / nuing / these / ten / years" -> "Contin- / uing / these / ten / years" Move hyphen to syllable break, remove phantom space. This entire last section of narration needs rephrasing. It doesn't really make sense currently. panel 4 "whump" you can rotate this and make it a bit bigger. p035 "one matcha ice cream please." framing lines removed.