p05 panel 3 "I thought she was a type to[...]" -> "I thought she was the type to[...]" p07 panel 1 "waugh!" this could be a bit bigger p10 panel 3 "ah, but her first[...]" "it really[...]" italicize panel 4 "grasp" I think the vibe of this font is a bit off - the unevenness of the letters gives a bit of a horror feel, while the original is pretty soft feeling. p12 panel 4 "there's not many girls[...]" move up and left very slightly panel 5 "It's all lies." it'd be nice to give this a bit more emphasis like the original. p14 panel 1 "So..." move down slightly panel 2 "That's kinda..." "...kinda like a confession or something?!" Is the repetition intentional? panel 3 "That was embarrassing" move left very slightly panel 5 "Let's go, let's go!" -> "Let's go, let's go! ♡" Add white heart, unless removed intentionally. p16 panel 4 "ahaha" add punctuation, maybe ! p17 panel 6 "I can't escape the fact that I'm in the front of a cute girl!" -> "[...] in front of a cute girl!"