pg58 >last panel, floating text add period pg59 >panel 3, bubble 1 add comma to the end >p5,b1 comma after "Um" pg62 >p1,b1 change comma to a period >second to last panel, floating add period pg63 >p4,b1 add comma after "senpais" pg64 >p1,b1 comma after "love" change period to question mark pg69 >p3 comma after "I" pg70 >p5,b1 add another period >last panel, sfx the /u/ thread said it was "pon", but you could put "pat" If it is too much to redraw, then you could put the text above of below the original. Also make sure to copy the same style as the original. So white font color with black stroke. pg71 >p2,b1 comma after "say" >last panel,b2 comma after "USA" comma after "now" pg72 >p2,b2 moving -> to move