pg57 >top text comma after "proposal" pg58 >last panel, floating text add period pg59 >panel 1, left text comma after "visa" >panel 3, bubble 1 add comma to the end >p5,b1 Um Carol, -> Um, Carol, pg60 >p4,b2 comma after "Anna" pg61 >black box marring -> marrying pg64 >p1 doesn't it matter? -> shouldn't it not matter? pg69 >p3 comma after "I" pg71 >p2,b1 comma after "say" >last panel,b2 comma after "USA" comma after "now" pg72 >p2,b2 moving -> to move