pg39 >panel 1, top text comma after "staircase" >panel 1, middle text even if alien will attack -> even if aliens were to attack, pg41 >p3,b1 in supply room -> in the supply room >p3,b2 comma after "uproar" pg46 >p3,right text add comma to end >p3, left text add period to end pg47 >bottom panels, last bubble Ok? -> okay? pg49 >p1,left text add period >second to last panel, top text add period pg50 >p3,bubble 1 comma after "Saki" >last panel, bubble comma after "Saki"