408 stare (enlarge) 414 ...Alright! (Normalize the size of this text with the size of the other dialogue text on this page) 415 Eh? I've started you? -> Eh? I've startled you? (Add 'l' to "startled") Subaru bought a ton of gummies for it... (Move slightly up and to the left. Try to move the text block closer to the center of the balloon. It doesn't have to be strictly under the text block in the joined balloon; it's okay to overlap a little. The key thing is to prevent the lines in one block from aligning with the other.) But... (Enlarge to normalize size with the rest of the page) 417 What about you, Hinako-san? -> What was it like for you? (I feel like it's important to put an idea of the past here, that Asahi is asking Hinako about her past, when she was little. I think the transition is a little abrupt even in the original, but withot the reference to the past, it's even more of a non-sequitur in English) 426 Hmm!? (Move down slightly for bigger top margin)