I'll go with you QC Page 01 >I've spent my life try to avoid troubling others. >I've spent my life trying to avoid troubling others. >Never spoke back to adults. >I never spoke back to adults, >went to school everyday. >went to school every day, [the hyphen here is unnecessary, as an adverb "every day" is two words.] Page 09 >Can I take a bit of a detour? >Mind taking a bit of a detour? [just seems awkward to say "I" here when they're together.] Page 10 >Let me have that bag. >Pass me the bag. Page 12 >I begged my mother to buy me one when I was little. >I'd beg my mother to buy me one when I was little, >I played here a lot. >and drink it here. [she's talking about something that she did often, not just one experience] Page 15 >when I'm like that, I can like myself just a little bit more. >I can like myself just a little bit more. [I think this flows from the prior line better like this.] Page 18 >Your father went to a good university, ok? >Your father went to a good university, okay? >But the way the world is, if you don't go to college... >But the way the world is, you have to go to college >you can't secure your future. >if you want to secure your future. Page 19 >Look, as your step-mom, I'm only trying to look out for you, ok? >Look, as your step-mom, I'm only trying to look out for you, okay? Page 22 >So then you should stay here tonight, ok? >You should stay here tonight, okay? Page 24 >Because you are the kind of person who can show me new worlds. >You're the person who's shown me a new world, after all. Page 41 >Even if the path I choose is a mistake... >Even if I choose the wrong path... >Even if the chances are low, I don't mind. >No matter how low our chances, I don't mind.