116_1 Aayuumii/-chan! -> Aayuumii-/chan! (Hyphen to preceding line) She was so cute-I loved her so much! And I... I... -> She was so cute—I loved her so much! And I...I... (Hyphen to emdash; if the emdash is ugly in this font, try using a hyphen set to 200% width instead. Also, remove space between ellipses) 117_1 I do.../Remem/-ber... -> I do.../Rememb-/ber... (Hyphen to previous line) Y'know, it's called Momoyama /Girls'/Kinder/-garten... -> Y'know, it's called Momoyama /Girls'/Kinder-/garten... (Both embolden and italicize "girls';" also, hyphen to previous line) 118_1 You've/got a crush/on Youko/-chan and/everything. -> You've/got a crush/on Youko-/chan and/everything. (Hyphen to previous line) 119_1 S... Sorry... -> S...Sorry... (Remove space between ellipsis and "Sorry") 120_1 Ayumi/-chan had/gotten/strong,/and bigger/than me. -> Ayumi-/chan had/gotten/strong,/and bigger/than me. (Hyphen to previous line) 121_1 Chitose/got to meet/up with/Tatekawa/-san. -> Chitose/got to meet/up with/Tatekawa-/san. (Hyphen to previous line) Tatekawa-san actually/was the same Ayumi/-chan I went to kinder/-garten with! OMG!! -> Tatekawa-san actually/was the same Ayumi-/chan I went to kinder-/garten with! OMG!! (Hyphens to previous line) I wanna/go, too,/but I can't!! -> I wanna/go, too, but/I can't!! ("but" to previous line) 122_1 Chitose,/mean/-while -> Chitose,/mean-/while (Hyphen to previous line) 125_1 The yuri manga my sister has have a lot of reversals in 'em, I'd say -> I'd say that in the yuri manga my sister has, there are a lot of reversals You're talking about deciding who has the male role and wh has the female role, aren't you? -> You're talking about deciding who has the male role and who has the female role, aren't you? (Add 'o' to second "who") Well.../Compared/to Youko/-chan... -> Well.../Compared/to Youko-/chan... (Hyphen to previous line) It's/all/imagin/-ary!! -> It's/all/imagin-/ary!! (Hyphen to previous line) 126_1 What's it like between you and you girlfriend? -> What's it like between you and your girlfriend? (Add 'r' to second "you" to make "your") I wonder/what Chitose/and Tatekawa/-san are up/to right/now... -> I wonder/what Chitose/and Tatekawa-/san are up/to right/now... (Hyphen to previous line) 127_1 In that case, you should be good, but hey— (Try using a hyphen set to 200% width here instead of an emdash character. It might look better.) 128_1 I wonder what was so urgent. (Move ~2px? to the right, ~3px? up for centering) 130_1 From/Youko/-chan? -> From/Youko-/chan? (Hyphen to previous line)