77 Move note about picture being on Instagram to credits page 79 ... (Raise to center of bubble) I'm at first floor entrance though -> I'm at first floor entrance (remove "though") 82 How about/this?! -> How/about/this?! (Change lining) Whoa, whoa, whoa?! (Add white stroke) No, seriously- -> No, seriously— (Hyphen to emdash; the contrast between the hyphen in "seri-ously" should be evident) 85 Wah (Adjust the angle; it's a little odd for the letters to aligned with the subjective motion lines—the stem of the 'h' is almost parallel with them) 86 And you had to choose the one store that currently has the nastiest line... (I imagine you wrestled with this one a bit, but if you can change the lining to allow for the font size to be increased ~1pt, that would probably help it feel more consistent with the other dialogue text on the page. If it helps, we can reword the line a little. Maybe something like "And you had to choos the /one/ store with the /nastiest/ line right now...") Standing around with nothing to do really chaps your ass-can't even play around, waiting there on your feet. -> Standing around with nothieng to do really chaps your ass—can't even play around, waiting there on your feet. (Hyphen to emdash) ... ... ... (Raise to center of these three bubbles) 89 ... ... (Raise ellipses to center of bubbles)