001 If... If-If-If... If you don't mind, please come visit! -> If... If—If—If... If you don't mind, please come visit! (Hyphens to emdashes) 005 Please don't stop in the middle~...It's embarrassing~... -> Please don't stop in the middle...~ It's embarrassing...~ (Tildes after ellipses) 私も何か振らなきゃ! I have to change the subject somehow, too! 006 But washing each others' back is a must have heart-throbbing situation... -> But washing each other's back is a must-have heart-throbbing situation... (Apostrophe between "other" and 's'; hyphen between "must" and "have") echo→ (Move lower to point to the text for the echo) 007 I-I-I-I-I'm going home! -> I—I—I—I—I'm going home! (Hyphens to emdashes) c-c-c-calm down, Natsume-san! -> c—c—c—calm down, Natsume-san! (Hyphens to emdashes)