58: consider adjusting the Cl spacing in the SFX so they don't touch. "girls' talk", unless only one girl is talking "But ...she's still blah blah". On page 63 when you have "But ... blah blah", you capitalize the Blah, which I prefer. But at any rate, I think they should be consistent. 59: "Her? ... way too good for me". Consider manually decreasing the spaces between words, I find it kinda weird. I would also consider manually adjusting the kerning in "for", although I get that the font is supposed to look wacky 60: consider a comma after "how cool she is" 61, P5: maybe comma after favorites? also maybe adjust the kerning in the wonky "perfect" to reduce the "fe" space, although there's a risk of hitting the descender on the p 62, P7: "I'm not that into it" sounds a bit weird because the sentence she's responding to doesn't really have a noun for "it" to refer to. Also, I'm sorry to say this since you're being clever, but the text centering jump really jumps out at me. But perhaps onions will vary. 63: see earlier comment about consistency with capitalization after "But..." Unless there's a reason it shouldn't be consistent, I honestly never know what to do about this. 64, p1: missing SFX. p4: Blush sfx—consider increasing the spacing in "sh". Also, since the B being rotated already makes it a bit harder to identify as a B at a glance, consider cleaning off the thingy that's above the straight line? Do you know what I mean? Also, to me, "The type to say" sounds more natural than "the kind to say", but if y'all think it's fine, it's fine. 65, p1: double check first bubble for rogue spaces. p3: I would lower the Ah and Uh a bit, and/or maybe rotate them a touch. p4: "That's enough" rather than "That enough" (aha! I FINALLY FOUND AN ACTUAL MISTAKE!). p5: I would find "in character for me" or "in my nature" more natural than "in my character", mayhaps. p6: I would move the "why" up to the previous line for rounder shape, but onions may vary 66, p1: perhaps one of the first two lines could be changed to maintain consistency on 1st/2nd person. p2, it's a tough call, but maybe raise the text in the first bubble a touch? 68: "all like that" sounds a bit odd to me 69: I'm a bit confused because the temple is the forehead, which is why I thought the japanese text was at the forehead, but then the arrow is at the back...? Anyway consider placing the text at the forehead. And also checking the translation. Maybe don't capitalize "appreciation" in "anime appreciation"? Fuck I hate people who don't like celery 70: "she has good grades as she is in the top 30 of the school" sounds weird, logically, to me. also, "really smiles". "gifted at working out" sounds like a japanese-ism, not sure I would say it in english.