dust, to be cropped: https://www.mediafire.com/?wsiakb9i54qjw2l export: 2000px, 32 colors **** >>sfx: you forgot to put the english translation >>text centering: usually too low (kindy check all pages; i checked two pages, you can use those as samples ) >>redraws; clones: can be improved **** page 11 panel1: font shift panel3 and panel6-7: shouldn't have the same fonts (from there, recheck the other pages with similar cases) page 9 panel 1; bubbles1& 2: up page 10: p2: sfx : blush b3: up p3: b1, b3: up last panel, last bubble: up page 13 last panel: grin =>the area you erased is very visible page 15 p3:visible erasures (http://puu.sh/hMGBO/f4c99aa7be.png) p4: increase the font size page 24 p1: Don't play around... and Don't worry... => visible erasures page 27 p2: That singular existence => visible erasures