ズザァ (This sound effect should be at least captioned ["Del Rey" style, as it were], as the othe sound effects are in this work. Gulf Standard has it marked as "whump") Ouch~ -> Ouch...! (I think that tildes are still non-standard in English, and should be replaced with punctuation closer to standard.) Heh -> Heh. (Add period) 094 笑った顔が見たくって。(If this isn't going to be replaced, I think it should be classified as "magazine chatter," and removed.) Did you/just/laugh? -> Did/you just/laugh? (Change lining) You laughed right!? -> You lauged, right!? (Comma after "laughed") I/was/n't- -> I was not— (This is a strange enough fit that I think we should break it up to make it flow better.) Laughing/Tomoe!/That's/an/ultra-rare! -> Laughing/Tomoe!/That's an/ultra-rare! (Change lining; avoid inverted triangle shape) I did NOT laugh. (Move ~2px? right, ~5px? down to center of bubble) 095 Hey~ -> Hey, (Enlarge. Also, tilde to comma; this is supposed to preface the "do it again!" which would need capitalization if it weren't a continuation of the same sentence) do it again! (~3px? right to the center of the balloon) I was on the ground! (Greatly enlarge; this text is all but illegible at this size.) hey~ hey~ (Enlarge) I told you, (Enlarge to normalize with the other text in this complex balloon) /way/ too big a deal out of this. (Embolden and italicize "way") . . . . . . (Replace vertical ellipsis with horizontal ellipsis) 096 The sound effects on this page need captions, like those on the floating text. However, consider replacing the floating text instead of captioning it; there isn't anything to redraw. 097 ぜーはー (Caption: "wheeze wheeze") ばんっ (Caption: "push") ゴッ (Caption: "whump") 098 a Bit. -> A bit. (Capital 'A', lowercase 'b') 099 ばさ (Caption: "fwump")