10.png: If that were case, then you'd think she'd at least let me contact her! -> If that were the case, then you'd think she'd at least let me contact her! (Add "the") Well, if she recognizes Mino's talent and seriously tries to make her her partner, then... (move ~3-5?px up for better margins) 13.png: Okay, maybe first, I'll teach you the stuff I explained to you today that looked like it went over your head. -> Okay, maybe first, I'll teach you the stuff I explained today that looked like it went over your head. (Remove a "to you") 14.png: But there are some annoying weapons where there's a delay after the shot before the tracking starts... (move right to improve left margin, 2-3px?) lower-left panel: the shift in text size is pretty noticable. Maybe lower the size of the text in the first two bubbles a bit? 16.png: The margins are tight on these bubbles. Maybe reduce text size a pt or two? The small text in panel 2 should prevent it from looking too out-of-place. 17.png: There's a lot on taking ground, but...If you want an easy method, (The margins on "taking ground" are a little tight. You might try to reshape the text block, or just reduce the size a little.) 18.png: panel 4: I think a different font on the poster would be better. It's supposed to be official and serious; maybe just reuse the font you used for "master cup," or something in that vein. Let;s hurry up and play. (Center in bubble; move right, maybe a bit up) 19.png: I gotta say, you have some talent. (Tight margins; reduce font size? If you do, watch that the difference isn't too stark between it and "coming so far after one night of cramming;" maybe reduce that one, too, if you have to.) We will kill them! (Is "them" the same size as "we" and "kill?" It looks like it might be) 20.png: ズイッ crick ざつ thrash 21.png: ...It kinda looks like she's having fun! (How does it look when you go one owrd per line and center it more top/bottom?) ドドド clop clop clop 23.png: You've already done a lot for me... (the shift in text size is pretty noticeable between this and the attached bubble. Try decreasing it one or two px.)