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306696 No.16944   [Reply]
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>> No.24704  

>>24703

Better late than never <3
Thank you very much for your efforts <3!!!

>> No.24707  

When's the next one?

>> No.24716  

>>16944
There's some grey lines in the clouds with dots only. Is that okay? (I know, it isn't).

>> No.24717  

Which page?

>> No.24750  

Well, that's what I found with fast looking: 36, 38, 39, 40, 41, 44, 45.



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439924 No.23572   [Reply]

One-shot, 28 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/yykuckgz

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>> No.24700  

Here is the file for QC!

>> No.24740  

p323
The flower you only can! -> The flower only you can!

And a few general comments you can probably ignore:

I think the levelling might be a bit strong. Some of the blushing lines on the characters are faded and hard to see compared to the raws, such as on p309.

On p332, you italicized the narrative text, but it hasn't been italicized anywhere else in the chapter. I'm not sure if this was on purpose, so I figured I should point it out. I believe the narrative text in the raws is the same for that page as it is on other pages.

Last thing, I find it odd that "Ichika" doesn't have crossbar I's. There's a bit of conflicting opinion on this, from what I can tell, though. Some sources suggest to only use it for personal pronouns, while others suggest to also use it for names and acronyms (such as CIA, FBI). Regardless, that's a convention more for western comics, so just go with whatever you feel is appropriate.

-

Everyone did really great work on this! It was a really nice oneshot. The two of them were both pretty likeable, and the painting reveal was really sweet.

>> No.24746  

Thanks for the QC!
Yeah, the levelling was a bit too strong but I was too lazy to do it for every page, so I only corrected it for the pages with blushes if that's okay.
I like this one shot too. It's pretty cute!

>> No.24748  

>>24746
Just one small thing I see on p330, which I initially missed, sorry about that. "I don't deserve to be reflected in those eyes!" is written in the dialogue font, instead of the narrative font.

Other than that, looks great!

>> No.24749  

Good catch!

http://www.mediafire.com/file/044n6p3ytf3w7rb/Secret+Sunflower+QC3.zip/file



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883588 No.22084   [Reply]

Write here your comments on releases.
Fill in the Subject field with the release name and consider writing sage in the Link field.

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This should be 'seethe' instead of 'seeth'.

>> No.24524  

>>24499
>>24500

are these fixed yet?

>> No.24525  

>>24524

Yes. I updated the links on the website and had the pages replaced at Dynasty. I believe someone has updated the chapters on Mangadex as well.

Thanks for pointing out these errors. If you'd like, consider checking out some of the chapters that have yet to be released and help us find any mistakes or things that need to be fixed.

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ch 77, pg 45, "eachother" should be, "each other"

>> No.24747  

Very excited to see this series being updated :)



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235752 No.24556   [Reply]

One-shot, 40 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/ycmn4g5e

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>> No.24731  

I updated the link.

pg5

I chose "coming straight at you" because "serious" was also confusing to me.

pg23

I chose "All my work...!?"

The only thing Meg says that confused me was

> ピーチくパーチクやかましいわね
> Aren't you just bumping gums fit to beat the band!

I thought it meant don't jump to conclusions. But after looking up these two idioms ("bumping gums" and "to beat the band"), together they mean talking a lot of smack? And that honestly makes a lot more sense, if that's right.

>> No.24741  

>>24731

Yes, that's the sense: they're making idle talk really loudly. If the reading was that confusion, I was thinking of changing it, but I think that's within tolerance, and we should keep it.

I did spot a couple things this time around that I didn't the first time, though:

012

You can show some restraint, even if you're trying to piss someone off.. -> You can show some restraint, even if you're trying to piss someone off... (Three dots in ellipsis)

I can't even lay an eye on her face... (Is the "I" in the wrong font?)

030

Swallow/this, and/you'll/speak no/lies! -> Swallow/this, and/you'll speak/no lies! (Change lining)

>> No.24743  

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1r0ttNmE3x8MA3G1wqclaXDfEPYpc3gOc?usp=sharing

updated

> I can't even lay an eye on her face... (Is the "I" in the wrong font?)

Yeah, it was the wrong font. Don't know why.. Good catch though!

>> No.24744  

>>24743

I think we should ship this.

Thank you everyone for your work.

>> No.24745  

>>24743
>>24744

Released.



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550432 No.23954   [Reply]

I've started translating this. The manga gives an English title ("missing month"), but it's a mistranslation, so I wrote my own. It's in Yuri Hime.

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>> No.24734  

>>24733
Yeah, 672 threw me since I wasn't sure which lines it was referring to and just guessed. "I didn't? Really?" is what I'd go with.

For 683, maybe "I'd/like you to hold my hand" to fit the bubble sizes better? I'm fine with "I'd like you/to hold my hand" as well if that works.

I had "kidding" initially, but thought "I lied" fit her better. It's not a big deal either way, though, and I don't mind changing it if you think it sounds weird or ambiguous.

I believe "I wish it were love" is the correct translation. You can find a lot of example sentences for the pattern (mostly ばいいのに, but some for ならいいのに as well). In the context of the story, I take it she doesn't think their relationship can be romantic because Asahi told her she won't ever fall in love.

>> No.24735  

>>24734

Oh, you're absolutely right about ならいいのに. I guess I got mixed up by thinking about the pieces separately instead of taking it together. That is definitely used for counterfactuals.

>> No.24736  

>>24734
Everything's updated! Should be good to go.

>> No.24738  

>>24736

Okay, released.

>> No.24742  

>>24735
Oh, and thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it. You had me second guessing myself on the last part, but it's safer to double check and make sure it's accurate than regret it later, especially for such an important line.



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469160 No.24388   [Reply]

One-shot, 24 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/yatq6hua

>> No.24396  

i'll do this one! probably will be ready sometime late june or early july

>> No.24619  

update: this one's taking longer than i expected. it has some very challenging redraws! and i've been very busy with work as well. i've got a script though and am on page 17 of redraws, so hopefully i'll have it done by august

>> No.24701  

it's finally ready! enjoy ^^
i don't really know what standard procedure for uploading is, so i put it on google drive. please feel free to repost!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NM0QeHz1WrqJlDeSX8P6ZA3X_-_McwxW/view?usp=sharing

>> No.24737  

>>24701

This looks really good, nice work. Just one question. On page 12, why do you write "long and veiny" when it says 黒くて長い? Judging by the picture and the うん...(and what happens next) I think she's talking about shit.

>> No.24739  

>>24701

One other thing. I see you translated the fanmail address for the author (on page 23). I'm usually a little hesitant to include that stuff, because I don't think authors like to get English mail from people saying stuff like "I read your manga on Mangathieves.com, I'm a huge fan!" when they haven't approved an English license. But I don't know that that would actually happen, and maybe Hino Arashi would actually be happy to get any mail readers send, who knows.



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371400 No.24688   [Reply]

https://mega.nz/file/edQmDKCS#vcUZrNc9atF4QTZ7yVNGHM74T7HsEhMGi_WAfAVIGuw

16 pages. A side story/continuation from That Girl Will Make Me a Woman and That Red on Me.

I guess that means whoever worked on That Red on Me has dibs if they want to work on this one. If not, I can translate this eventually.

>> No.24712  

I can edit this

>> No.24719  

Are you wanting to translate it? I don't mind if you want to do it. I haven't looked at it, so I don't have any feelings one way or another. If you don't really care, I can take a crack at it.

>> No.24720  

>>24719

Go for it.

>> No.24721  

I'll try to have the translation done in the next couple of days.

>> No.24722  
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Here's the translation. It went pretty quick and easy, but if there are any issues or anything that could be improved, please let me know.

I'm thinking she probably falls asleep at the end of page 152.



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425511 No.24267   [Reply]

https://storia.takeshobo.co.jp/manga/kiminitsumugu/#episodeLink

Ch 1 Raws: https://mega.nz/folder/kDJFlCqJ#UCRF6Ast7tLwB0mIe8PWvQ

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>> No.24696  

>>24695
She really does draw a lot, her art is also full colour and incredible. Here's the mega folder: https://mega.nz/folder/ehhHCZTC#55QWcWfQVdKB6vTGF6ZUgw

>> No.24698  

>>24696

Thanks for gathering them all like that! I'll probably translate these in chunks in between the monthly releases. There's also other stuff I should probably work on, like the rest of this one https://safe.yuri-project.net/res/24069.html

>> No.24699  

>>24698
Oh, I love that anthology. I'm actually almost halfway through the cleaning of girls complex a la mode from that one (lots of onomatopoeias and little time) so don't worry, you can take your time haha.

>> No.24714  

Here's the upscaled version of chapter 6.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/eii8zk34xqi9d5t

>> No.24715  

>>24714

Okay, I'll get started on this. This chapter is sadly pretty short.



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526686 No.16584   [Reply]

Last chapter. Includes the Veronica special.

TL: http://www.mediafire.com/download/j7mybi53sutr5b1
ED: http://www.mediafire.com/download/5im5ciewn7kqnr8

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Veronica

>> No.19299  

let me do this too after you release ch08.:)

>> No.23494  

Thanks for the translation, intend to finish this one though it will take me a while.

>> No.24552  

I spoke with Orange Pekoe, and the two of us are hoping to get this finished soon.

>> No.24713  

Here we are. Sorry for the really, really long wait. That's totally on me.
https://mega.nz/folder/tOoFXTJb#_Rpc0VzvhKbW1e0EaF8P-Q

I decided to go with the approach of placing the english sfx next to the original. Partially because the original sfx are pretty nice. Partially because I did a few pages the other way and the redraws were hell and my sfx weren't really satisfactory to me.

Anyway, let me know if I should make any changes, or if the sfx should be redone, or anything else.



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1535780 No.24453   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/tk4szmhv33kuv5o

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>>24670
This is what it looks like without.
I'll defer to you, but my preference would to be either leave it as it was (included, in the similar font) or use the "french word" font for the word.

>> No.24675  

>>24672

My desire for consistency is great enough that I would opt for leaving the diacritics out.

>> No.24684  

>>24675
Here it is!
https://files.catbox.moe/ong47h.zip

>> No.24685  

>>24684

I think this is good.

Thank you for your work.

>> No.24686  

>>24684
>>24685

Released.



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