RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/y68muxx5s1z3s2z
I'll get on this soon.
>>24100Is this soon?At any rate, I wanted to draw attention to one portion that seemed fairly strange to me:> [9/16 (123_1.png)]> あっ サーブル(※)用の剣だ> Oh, a weapon for saber*.> ※フェンシングの標目のひとつ> *One of the ways to get into fencingAs far as I can tell 標目 isn't a fencing term, or used to designate different fencing events. Armed with my dictionary, I've rendered a translation into something that, as far as I can tell, is as awkward as the original. But my Japanese isn't that good, and I wouldn't be surprised if I'm missing something here.
>>24100
Is this soon?
At any rate, I wanted to draw attention to one portion that seemed fairly strange to me:
> [9/16 (123_1.png)]
> あっ サーブル(※)用の剣だ> Oh, a weapon for saber*.
> ※フェンシングの標目のひとつ> *One of the ways to get into fencing
As far as I can tell 標目 isn't a fencing term, or used to designate different fencing events. Armed with my dictionary, I've rendered a translation into something that, as far as I can tell, is as awkward as the original. But my Japanese isn't that good, and I wouldn't be surprised if I'm missing something here.
>>24119The kanji is 種目.
>>24120Dang, that's embarrassing. Not the first time it's happened, either.Correction:> [9/16 (123_1.png)]> あっ サーブル(※)用の剣だ> Oh, a weapon for saber*.> ※フェンシングの種目のひとつ> *One of the events in fencing
>>24120
Dang, that's embarrassing. Not the first time it's happened, either.
Correction:
> ※フェンシングの種目のひとつ> *One of the events in fencing
Time again already? I will get started.
Still working on this, slowly. I did not get taken by Corona-chan yet.
I think there is a missing dialogue bubble translation here. Page 128.
>>24158It looks like that bubble just has an ellipsis in it.
>>24158
It looks like that bubble just has an ellipsis in it.
I did not feel the need to change the magazine titles since they're just nonsense anyway.catbox.moe is having issues so I had to find a new file dropper.https://gofile.io/?c=6us09Y
>>24166Here are some comments; mostly punctuation, a couple typos, and a little lining.
>>24166
Here are some comments; mostly punctuation, a couple typos, and a little lining.
>>24170Here is the update: https://gofile.io/?c=ABFxGv
>>24174It looks like the changes on pages 116_1, 117_1, and 118_1 got lost somehow.Also:127_1In that case, you should be good, but hey- -> In that case, you should be good, but hey— (It looks like the emdash here is like an emdash character at the width of a hyphen. I think what we want here is a hyphen set to 200% width.)
>>24174
It looks like the changes on pages 116_1, 117_1, and 118_1 got lost somehow.
Also:
127_1
In that case, you should be good, but hey- -> In that case, you should be good, but hey— (It looks like the emdash here is like an emdash character at the width of a hyphen. I think what we want here is a hyphen set to 200% width.)
>>24175The bolding in this font is barely noticeable and the hyphens do look like emdashes. I even bolded the 200% width hyphen so it does not look so thin.I can give you the PSD if you want to mess with it.https://gofile.io/?c=3BniqF
>>24180I think this is good to go.Thank you for all your work.Hopefully we can get this admin business figured out in short order and get this released.
>>24180
I think this is good to go.
Thank you for all your work.
Hopefully we can get this admin business figured out in short order and get this released.
Released.
- wakaba 3.0.8 + futaba + futallaby -