One-shot, 12 pages.https://mega.nz/folder/tHo0mLaZ#Eepx6UQNLX1gZcRATShPZg
One-shot, 12 pages.
https://mega.nz/folder/tHo0mLaZ#Eepx6UQNLX1gZcRATShPZg
Hey, I edited one of the other oneshots by the same artist, I wouldn't mind editing this one too if someone is willing to translate it.
>>25531I found a translator via discord. I'm posting their translation here for reference.https://mega.nz/file/w1gEEJDJ#sC_JXHqqOj3m8EbAqJaHu-3VOPHQjZEVKm4NeFtx3A8
>>25540Here's the first version done.https://mega.nz/file/55BVEAhb#gggr3PWgBDK-prKPKJUVEC4bojEqOxwsbY09XM52IoA
>>25541here's v2. This should be ready for release soon.https://mega.nz/file/s9ZETb7C#SwkDCqfuoOIJVSb77o3mMVYSMprPYW5fw5qSduZm1vM
>>25543My proofreaders have given me the green light and I've added a credits page. Unless something else needs to be fixed or added, this is ready for release.https://mega.nz/file/MtwwTaiA#qB9eQ3lPqULekqtl0leXNtnNJqmzWvdBAx5eKvPWhyA
I would change font sizes to make it look more consistent. It's often times either too small or too big for the bubbles.There were also a few bubbles like "girls like you, class rep." on page 5 where you used one word for each line even though it's unnecessary since there is still enough space.
>>25544p07 panel 4"Ichikawa-san!" - in the top right of this bubble is い, so she's stuttering "I-Ichikawa-san!".In that same panel, there is also a small さっ sound effect to the right of Class Rep's head.In the following panel, you erased an in-bubble drawing of Class rep's eyes.
>>25544p07 panel 4"Ichikawa-san!" - in the top right of this bubble is い, so she's stuttering "I-Ichikawa-san!".
In that same panel, there is also a small さっ sound effect to the right of Class Rep's head.
In the following panel, you erased an in-bubble drawing of Class rep's eyes.
Did this ever get published?
>>25592Unfortunately not. I see now that the files have been deleted, but I do still have the pngs on my hard drive so we can move forward with releasing it.I was initially intending to give Nonan some time in hopes they come back to finish things up, but the files being deleted seem to imply that's not going to happen. Though if you still have a way to contact them to figure things out, that'd be great. Failing that, I think the ideal approach would be for me to work off the pngs to apply this last round of QC and get it out the door.
>>25592Unfortunately not. I see now that the files have been deleted, but I do still have the pngs on my hard drive so we can move forward with releasing it.
I was initially intending to give Nonan some time in hopes they come back to finish things up, but the files being deleted seem to imply that's not going to happen. Though if you still have a way to contact them to figure things out, that'd be great. Failing that, I think the ideal approach would be for me to work off the pngs to apply this last round of QC and get it out the door.
>>25593I tried, but can't get through on discord.Also, >>25415 seems to be a continuation of the story. I'd TL if there was interest in story.
>>25593I tried, but can't get through on discord.
Also, >>25415 seems to be a continuation of the story. I'd TL if there was interest in story.
>>25595No worries! We can definitely get it finished. Here's a link to the files I have on hand:https://mega.nz/folder/wT4VhKgD#-t3KG9xHZ3dt3DGk70YR9ALet me know if there's anything in particular you'd like me to adjust aside from what blob and I mentioned previously. One thing missing is a translation for さっ on p7.Also, that sounds good regarding the sequel! I'll follow your lead on that.
>>25595No worries! We can definitely get it finished. Here's a link to the files I have on hand:https://mega.nz/folder/wT4VhKgD#-t3KG9xHZ3dt3DGk70YR9A
Let me know if there's anything in particular you'd like me to adjust aside from what blob and I mentioned previously. One thing missing is a translation for さっ on p7.
Also, that sounds good regarding the sequel! I'll follow your lead on that.
>>25596The さっ just indicates a sound like she's turning around. "Whish" or "turn" or somesuch. Sorry to miss it first time around. As for the TS, I'll leave that in more capable hands.
>>25596
The さっ just indicates a sound like she's turning around. "Whish" or "turn" or somesuch. Sorry to miss it first time around.
As for the TS, I'll leave that in more capable hands.
Alright, I've made some changes, and here it is again!https://mega.nz/folder/oO5lRTDQ#xGD_ATkUkywkvTXi22fTIgI tried to stick as close as I could stylistically to the way the editor had it. I only really resized text bubbles, for the most part. Let me know if there's more that should be done.
Alright, I've made some changes, and here it is again!https://mega.nz/folder/oO5lRTDQ#xGD_ATkUkywkvTXi22fTIg
I tried to stick as close as I could stylistically to the way the editor had it. I only really resized text bubbles, for the most part. Let me know if there's more that should be done.
Released.Good work everyone, thanks for resurrecting this and finishing it.
Released.
Good work everyone, thanks for resurrecting this and finishing it.
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