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1813285 No.26201  

One-shot, 16 pages
RAW: https://t.ly/dZM3

>> No.26204  
File: Cat Love.txt -(3818 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Content warning: pussy, pussy in heat, smug pussy.

>> No.26207  

I'm editing this; it should be done soon.

>> No.26208  

Redraw and typeset done: https://mega.nz/file/gQECzCgK#wC3PROGiA9SkMDu86K_g1tdSQSR8p67sxXWZxk3VRNs

I'll add the credits page after the first PR/QC is done.

>> No.26263  

Still waiting for PR/QC for this.

>> No.26265  

>>26263
Page 02. Second panel. This is a slight mistranslation of the subject. Hikaru-chan here is refering to the cats, saying "[their lovey-dovey time] kinda lacks mood". Her small text reads "it's different than what I'd imagined".
Then, Mao-chan replies "it's cuz they're animals after all".

Page 03. Third panel. I would keep the ? in good evening, since it adds more to the mood.
Also, you should switch my to your in the last box. The last bubble before that used ...your guard down, so the pronouns have to agree.

Page 07. Last panel. Want->wanted .
That is all.

>> No.26268  

Thank you!
Here is the new version: https://mega.nz/file/pZFn1R5S#ZU25zxmSlPsCYVThLgtpfeJaK1GDGoQP1OppzsoeahY
I changed the page 2 panel 2 b1 for "It kinda lacks mood.", I hope that is fine.
Added a credits page, too.

Do I send it to Dynasty?

>> No.26270  

>>26268

I'll post it to the website then upload on Dynasty. Was this a doujin or do you know where it was published?

>> No.26272  

The initial release was on Twitter (4 posts of 4 images each): https://twitter.com/amazaki_suika/status/1346776494354223104

Also from the same day on Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86864504

It might have been added to some compilations after that, but I'm not sure of that.

Thank you for uploading it, schuyguy!

>> No.26274  

>>26272

Okay, I'll say that counts as self-published then. Thanks for the info, I'll release it now.

>> No.26275  

Released.



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