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File: Galette Vol. 1.jpeg -(301968 B, 1371x1920) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.
301968 No.20403  

RAW:http://www.mediafire.com/file/1olfb6adcz0xv5n

>> No.21010  
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Translation for Cotton Candy part 1 (of 3)

>> No.21182  

signing up for editor

>> No.21183  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoNVFOUTRMTEYtOGs
adding the credits later

>> No.21196  

>>21183

If anyone could translate the first page, that'd be great. Otherwise, everything looks good to me. Good job. And sorry about the wait. School's been a pain.

>> No.21197  

>>21196

Here's my take:

みてるとふわふわ、触るとぺたぺた。
Fluffy to look at, sticky to the touch.
「すき」と「嫌」が交錯する。
"Love" and "hate" blending together.
”わたあめ”みたいな、この気持ち。
This cotton candy-like feeling.

>> No.21200  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoWHR4MlVHVTAzUk0

>> No.21202  

>>21200

Other than the two untranslated sfx on the second page, can you erase page numbers? All good otherwise.

>> No.21223  

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoWHR4MlVHVTAzUk0

>> No.21231  

>>21223

On page 18, when you colored over the page number, it looks like you used a different shade of black. Can you match the color with the rest of the panel?

>> No.21242  
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329365

>>21231 fixd

>> No.21245  

>>21242

Looks good.

>> No.21248  

>>21223
Released.



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