RAW:http://www.mediafire.com/file/1olfb6adcz0xv5n
Translation for Cotton Candy part 1 (of 3)
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https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoNVFOUTRMTEYtOGsadding the credits later
>>21183If anyone could translate the first page, that'd be great. Otherwise, everything looks good to me. Good job. And sorry about the wait. School's been a pain.
>>21183
If anyone could translate the first page, that'd be great. Otherwise, everything looks good to me. Good job. And sorry about the wait. School's been a pain.
>>21196Here's my take:みてるとふわふわ、触るとぺたぺた。Fluffy to look at, sticky to the touch.「すき」と「嫌」が交錯する。"Love" and "hate" blending together.”わたあめ”みたいな、この気持ち。This cotton candy-like feeling.
>>21196
Here's my take:
みてるとふわふわ、触るとぺたぺた。Fluffy to look at, sticky to the touch.「すき」と「嫌」が交錯する。"Love" and "hate" blending together.”わたあめ”みたいな、この気持ち。This cotton candy-like feeling.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-NAcy6fcWxoWHR4MlVHVTAzUk0
>>21200Other than the two untranslated sfx on the second page, can you erase page numbers? All good otherwise.
>>21200
Other than the two untranslated sfx on the second page, can you erase page numbers? All good otherwise.
>>21223On page 18, when you colored over the page number, it looks like you used a different shade of black. Can you match the color with the rest of the panel?
>>21223
On page 18, when you colored over the page number, it looks like you used a different shade of black. Can you match the color with the rest of the panel?
>>21231 fixd
>>21242Looks good.
>>21242
Looks good.
>>21223Released.
- wakaba 3.0.8 + futaba + futallaby -