One-shot, 44 pages.https://tinyurl.com/y8ewwgce
Rummaging through the archives again. Content warning: School girl existential crisis, dead hamster as plot device, Tsuuuuundere.
hi I decided to try clean and typeset this. would it be okay if you also translated the shop signs/misc text on the following pages?531, 533, 534, 535, 536, 544
>>26205—531Osouzai • Tsukudani###Souzai is: https://hapasjapan.com/souzai/ ###Tsukudani is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsukudani—533Kitamachi Shopping Street—534-3Ooyasou###name of shopOsouzai • Tsuku###awningOur specialty!Fresh croquettes###sign-4Our specialty!Fresh croquettes###signHot Seller!###on shirt—536-1Points2X-2Direction###cut off—544-2Lunch ScheduleMonth Day
>>26205
—531
Osouzai • Tsukudani###Souzai is: https://hapasjapan.com/souzai/ ###Tsukudani is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsukudani
—533
Kitamachi Shopping Street
—534
-3
Ooyasou###name of shop
Osouzai • Tsuku###awning
Our specialty!Fresh croquettes###sign
-4
Hot Seller!###on shirt
—536
-1
Points2X
-2
Direction###cut off
—544
Lunch ScheduleMonth Day
>>25773Editing is done. Ready for QC.https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H4ypzXEQJ4yXNxuneq8Sib4WE679bRbp/view?usp=share_link
qc complete! credits updated https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1frlF6On-pDhL2lJPPku8UOSz9m6Pl7Ky
>>26260A few typoes:The author's name is "Hanimi", not "Hanima", that needs to be changed on the title page, and in the credits as well.On the credits title page, "volume" is misspelled as "volme".
>>26260
A few typoes:
The author's name is "Hanimi", not "Hanima", that needs to be changed on the title page, and in the credits as well.
On the credits title page, "volume" is misspelled as "volme".
tahnk you, typos fixed! same drive
>>26260Great work on this! Lovely story. Here are some suggestions, mainly focused on bubble centering, as well as some typos, phrasing issues, and a missing page.
>>26260 Looking really sharp! I'm loving the style. While there are a few minor details that don't quite hit the mark for me like font size and leading but that's mostly just personal taste. Good job!
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