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430452 No.24555  

One-shot, 44 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/y8ewwgce

>> No.25773  
File: A Soft Memorial.txt -(8356 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Rummaging through the archives again. Content warning: School girl existential crisis, dead hamster as plot device, Tsuuuuundere.

>> No.26205  

hi I decided to try clean and typeset this. would it be okay if you also translated the shop signs/misc text on the following pages?
531, 533, 534, 535, 536, 544

>> No.26206  

>>26205

—531

Osouzai • Tsukudani
###Souzai is: https://hapasjapan.com/souzai/
###Tsukudani is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tsukudani

—533

Kitamachi Shopping Street

—534

-3

Ooyasou
###name of shop

Osouzai • Tsuku
###awning

Our specialty!
Fresh croquettes
###sign

-4

Our specialty!
Fresh croquettes
###sign

Hot Seller!
###on shirt

—536

-1

Points
2X

-2

Direction
###cut off

—544

-2

Lunch Schedule
Month Day

>> No.26215  

>>25773
Editing is done. Ready for QC.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H4ypzXEQJ4yXNxuneq8Sib4WE679bRbp/view?usp=share_link

>> No.26260  

qc complete! credits updated
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1frlF6On-pDhL2lJPPku8UOSz9m6Pl7Ky

>> No.26269  

>>26260

A few typoes:

The author's name is "Hanimi", not "Hanima", that needs to be changed on the title page, and in the credits as well.

On the credits title page, "volume" is misspelled as "volme".

>> No.26277  

tahnk you, typos fixed! same drive

>> No.26290  
File: A Soft Memorial ED QC 1.txt -(3950 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>26260
Great work on this! Lovely story. Here are some suggestions, mainly focused on bubble centering, as well as some typos, phrasing issues, and a missing page.

>> No.26309  

>>26260 Looking really sharp! I'm loving the style. While there are a few minor details that don't quite hit the mark for me like font size and leading but that's mostly just personal taste. Good job!



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