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Short yuri oneshot from ODAICOMICS. Could find any of their stuff on MD. Also only yuri I saw from them. Pulled from pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/90852832

>> No.26857  

I might do the typesetting too once the TL is done. in the meantime, here's the CLRD

>> No.26858  



>> No.26859  

Sounds good. Let me know if you don't want to TS.

>> No.26860  
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Bada bing, bada boom.

>> No.26865  

here it is! both png and psd in the file, to allow for easier editing


>> No.26866  

Looks good! Cute story as I expected! Couple things that stuck out to me:

Pg8 pn3: that -> that's
Bubbles with just ellipses: the ellipses tend to be too far down (off center). Up to you if you want to fix that.

>> No.26870  

ok i fixed the thing on p8!
the ellipses being far down is a thing i do bc i prefer it that way, but here's it fixed, too!


>> No.26871  

Looks good! Just needs a credit page and should be good to go, at least from my perspective, for what it is.

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