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954265 No.5875  

Raws: http://www.mediafire.com/?xfh716jc1n3svf0

So with the death of Endless-Abyss this series is homeless once again. I'll do the typesetting and editing (although i don't think it needs much) as well as all sfx. All i need is a translator.

>> No.5878  

Not worth the effort.

>> No.5919  

>>5878
Ah you think so? I found the series quite enjoyable. It's a shame theres only 3 chapters left to do.

>> No.6003  

I can do it but not right away.

>> No.6008  

Well it's not like the thread is going anywhere, please take your time :)

>> No.7773  

I just read that manga and I came here purely out of desparation to learn that the scanlation was not yet even done.

Please, people, whoever you are. Please finish this project. I really want to know everything.

Fan Speculations says that the girl was a victim of child abuse and she believes herself a mermaid as an escape from reality. I am intrigue by the mysteries

>> No.8824  

Still looking for a translator who will finish this project.

>> No.9700  
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Chapter 10 translation.

Fight-o! Yamada Nagisa!

>> No.9716  

>>9700 and then Gulf Standard to the rescue~~

>> No.10427  

hi, i'm giving editing this chapter a go should be done soon...ready for QC

>> No.10432  

so i did it.... i think......

>> No.10433  

jeez i suck at this internet stuff....it's http://www.mediafire.com/?ffzsm4nljxhccct
or you can click my name on previous reply

>> No.10527  

>>10433
Don't remove punctuation from the script. Don't add misspellings: just copy and paste the lines from the script, don't retype them. Make sure all sentences end in punctuation, like the first bubble should end in "." and the second bubble in "...". Don't cramp the bubble edges too much, reduce font size where appropriate.

page 96
Don't you have an obligation to explain things to us properly? =>
Don't you owe people an explanation?

With Kajima also out serving his suspension =>
With Kanajima also out serving his suspension,

page 99
Hard to believe from looking at him, that he's got kid in middle school... =>
Hard to believe from looking at him, that he's got a kid in middle school...

page 101
Your a classmate? =>
You're a classmate of hers?

page 102
I see =>
Right.

But not a friend, right? =>
But you aren't her friend, right?

There's no way that girl would have any friends. =>
There's no way that girl'd have friends.

Because she's an idiot, you see. =>
'Cause she's an idiot, you see.

Idiots can't possibly make any friends. =>
Idiots can't make friends.

She's been that way since she was born. She takes after her mother. =>
Kid was cursed from the start. Taking after her mother.

Only her face is good. Her mind, on the other hand... =>
She's got the looks, but not the brain.

page 103
How can you speak like that about a child? =>
How can you speak like that about your child?!

"Hey, even I hate to say it" <-- there is dust in that bubble under the 's' from 'say'.

page 104
That's not really any kind of evidence that any of it was any of my doing. =>
That doesn't proof it was by my doing.

page 105
even if you are a child. =>
even if she is a child.

I wonder could your parents pay it? =>
I wonder if your parents could pay that.

page 109
Coming at a time like this... are you really that desperate to stand out!? =>
Coming at a time like this... are you really /that/ desperate to stand out!?
(emphasis)

"* outside ? sidelines ?" <-- She is deaf left.

Is it fun? --being able to say whatever you like from the left-hand side. =>
Are you enjoying saying that crap to her left ear?

page 110
Alright, I'm starting homeroom!
All right, I'm starting homeroom!

page 111
Alright then, see you all next week. =>
All right then, see you all next week.

page 112
Are you coming over? =>
Ohh, I'm coming over!
(dust in bubble)

"I've already been smeared all over with sweet, sticky sugar." <-- dust in this bubble

The things I see, the things I touch, anything and everything--it all clings messily to me. =>
Everything I see or touch becomes a sticky mess.

page 116
Is this something you intend to pursue right after highschool? =>
Is this something you intend to pursue right after high school?

Or perhaps your looking to go on to the National Defense Academy as a "gorgeous officer-candidate", type of deal? =>
Or perhaps you're looking to go on to the National Defense Academy as a "gorgeous officer-candidate", type of deal?

**Form says Yamada Nagisa first choice: Self Defense Force =>
**The forms says Yamada Nagisa's first choice is Self Defense Force.

Highschool is something it's definately better to get yourself through.
High school is something you definitely should get yourself through.

It will make the rest of your life that much easier. =>
It will make the rest of your life much easier.

Even if you have to split part time work between school hours, there are ways to accommadate that. =>
Even if you need a part-time job there are accommodations.
(There is dust in this bubble)

page 118
If my own mother hadn't spoiled that fu--er, my brother rotten, he wouldn't have turned out like that =>
If Mother hadn't spoiled that brat, I mean my brother, rotten, he wouldn't have turned out like that...

page 119
In this case your like the mother. =>
In this case /you're/ like the mother.
(there is emphasis on /you're/, too)

page 120
"...No..." <-- leftover dot in the bubble.

As for your brother, I'll come the house and confront him personally. =>
As for your brother, I'll come to the house and confront him personally.

page 121
"What your brother needs right now is /other people/! <-- dust in bubble, "/other people/" is not emphasized.

what you need right now is security! =>
what you need right now is /security/!
(emphasis)

"But in so many households these days, those things are in chronic short supply." <-- dust in bubble under "many"

page 124
"Sorry. He just kept going on and on, blah blah blah..." <-- dust in bubble
"About what?" <-- dust in bubble

>> No.10598  

Hey, sorry for that late reply I was busy recently.
First I'd like to thank Procyon for the awesome QC. I learnt loads (can't believe I didn't think of using copy paste:P) I did a corrected version but noticed it had already been released:
http://www.mangahere.com/manga/a_lollipop_or_a_bullet/c010/
I assume this was done by Gulf Standard or maybe another translator...either way not sure why nobody else mentioned they were doing it. Anyway thx again...xD

>> No.10602  

>>10598
No it's not done by Gulf. Whoever it was didn't do a very good job at it, so it's better we release our own version.

>> No.10917  

Man they really need an rss feed for each thread, i could've had this done two months ago if i had remembered. So i'm doing the 35 pages Gulf Standard translated. I'd like some criticism so here are the first 10 pages. If you have any comments i'd like them sooner rather than later so i can incorporate them now so i don't have to go back over it.

First 10 pages here: http://www.mediafire.com/?n4dynaf187no3uu

And Gulf Standard, could you translate another 30 pages please?

>> No.10926  
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Chapter 11

>> No.10982  

Ok here's chapter 10: http://www.mediafire.com/?f4bsrefrks3c94f

If i'm correct this stays in QC for 5 days. After that it says to put releases on the home page and officially upload it but i doubt that the admin just has the directory open for anyone to upload to. So who should i contact about that?

In the meantime i'm starting on chapter 11 tomorrow.

>> No.10985  
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480481

>>10982
There is a good deal of dust, and edges that need too be cleaned.

The text shaping could be better.

Some of the pages are a few pixels larger than 1600.

Phyis will personally upload it once QC is done

and drop your white leveling a few points.

>> No.11161  

>>10982

Apply >>10527, where relevant.

>> No.11995  

Bump. QC not applied.

>> No.13593  

Just making a note. I will do this, it's just long and I'm starting from scratch.

>> No.13604  
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Chapter 12. Page 172 is actually part of chapter 11.

I never noticed before, but if you take "Masa" out of Umino Masachika you get Umino Chika (Sangatsu no Lion).

>> No.13693  
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Chapter 13.

IT'S OVER

>> No.13694  

Gulf Standard, I actually haven't read this yet, so I'm not sure. What release's/group's page numbering are you using for the flashbacks?

>> No.13698  
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>>13694
Since on review it kind of seems bad-faith to use other people's releases, here's new translations for those sections.

>> No.13710  

https://www.mediafire.com/?bbdyvj6q5g6e1m1
Sorry for being a bit slow. I've been distracted by various other things.

>> No.13772  

>>13710
Apply >>10527 where relevant.

104
That doesn't proof it was by my doing.
That doesn't prove any of it was /my/ doing.

105

>>even if you are a child. => even if she is a child.

Isn't he referring to Nagisa here?

106
Are you enjoying saying that crap to her left ear?
Do you enjoy talking shit to her left ear like that?

116
Even if you need a part-time job there are accommodations.
If you want to work part-time while you attend, there are accommodations for that.

>> No.13774  

>>13772
https://www.mediafire.com/?7517itq3de5we92

I was unsure who to credit for the raws.

>> No.13843  

>>13774
"A Lollipop or a Bullet" as title.

The file-naming is the same as public raws I downloaded a while back, so I don't think the provider is knowable.

106
che
tch

114
cough cough
Cough, cough...

"sugar candy".
"sugar candy."

115
second. Honest.
second, honest.

116
"gorgeous officer-candidate",
"gorgeous officer-candidate,"

117
hikikomori
/hikikomori/

118
that brat, I mean
that brat... I mean

hikikomori
/hikikomori/

119
"live bullets",
"live bullets,"

122
Stay away!
STAY AWAY!

>> No.13845  

https://www.mediafire.com/?w7ru5vb39ebmo5z
Is there a difference between 'NEET' and 'hikikomori'? I can shape the text a bit better if it's worded like that, or is that too localized?

>> No.13848  

NEET doesn't really have the elements of withdrawal or agoraphobia, so I think it's too general. The term doesn't recur after this chapter, so it's only a matter of a bubble or two.

>> No.13850  

>>13848
Ah, I see. I'll just leave it as is then.

>> No.13895  

Markup: http://uqc.me/f9ook

pg 95: "go anywhere." lower
pg 98: "Ugh..." tick lower
pg 102: "I..." bit larger
pg 107: Border from the original sfx in 2nd panel still faintly visible
pg 113: "Let's walk" bit lower and larger
pg 117: "so I simply" bit lower
pg 121: "what you need" bit lower
pg 124: "Me neither." lower
pg 125: "The storm is coming." lower
pg 127: "Got it, got it." lower
pg 128: "Ah" lower

>> No.13896  

https://www.mediafire.com/?9mpttxieakmnmjm
>>13895
Sorry about that. If I ever mess up dusting that badly again (I'll try not to) just say so and I'll double check myself.

>> No.17052  

Just for a quick status update. I'm about half way done with the next chapter. Fully cleaned and half typeset.

>> No.24420  

Moved this to "Needs Editor". Currently on ch 11 >>10926



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